Tormented Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Well to show the anticipation of my upcoming giga set, here's a card that could go well in almost any deck!. IMG CREDIT: http://tarrzan.deviantart.com/art/Dawn-Warrior-47717435 [img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3313/229168.jpg[/img] Effect: This effect can be used during either player's turn. When your opponent activates a Trap Card, Tribute this face-up card to negate the activation of the Trap Card and destroy it.This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. During each of your Standby Phases, Special Summon 1 "Robot Token" (Machine-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. These Tokens cannot declare an attack. If you control any "Dawn Token(S)", your opponent cannot select other monsters you control as attack target(s). Rate,Hate,Comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 I kinda like it uhhh I see no OCG errors it could have a better pic soooo I'll give you uhhhh an 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 whats wrong with the pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 [align=center]I like the pic!9/10[/align][align=center]Well I didn't notice that!In fact I didn't noitice any problems with it![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Wow the only problem is the not fullstop......Do you think it makes sense with the name and all though? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 OCG Fixes:When your opponent activates a Trap Card, you can Tribute this face-up card...Dawn Token(s)It may be wrong but i'm too lazy too check it... It's balanced considering it's a level 7Should Robot and Dawn Tokens be the same thing or are they different tokens from your giga set?The image is good, not overused9/10 Great job Serenade :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 They could be used in the same way.......but there not dawn is used in giga and robot can be used with whatever rolmfao! but thats the only ocg error i didn't realise whilst making it lol. Oh and thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Nice 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Thankies Al Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 I just dont like the picture! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 oh i see....i thougght u meant by squished lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center]Wait, the name is too long and how can it De-Spell? 8/10.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Against = De its bassicly meaning i dont like spell and trap Rolmfao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Nope. "Dawn Tokens". You do not use (s). (Scapegoat would like a word with you. :D So yes, I did check before I posted.) Still, considering its Lv. 7 and very useful, I'll give you a 9/10. Machines aren't my forte, so I really don't like them much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Yeah there is no such thing as a dawn token but ill make them as soon as i get a good enough picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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legendhiro Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 This effect can be used during either player's turn. When your opponent activates a Trap Card, you can(?) Tribute this face-up card to negate the activation of the Trap Card and destroy it.This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. During each of your Standby Phases, Special Summon 1 "Robot Token" (Machine-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. "Robot Tokens" cannot declare an attack. If you control any "Dawn Tokens", your opponent cannot select other monsters you control as attack targets. the card is very well thought out. the way you have it worded though it has to be tributed to negate a trap that is activated, making it very easy to defeat. i fixed your ocg. overall the effect is nice, and i like the pic. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 Thats The Point Ya see of makin it be slightly like a trap....but thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 its not like a trap though. the way you have it worded it will have to tribute itself against the first trap your opponent activates. that means they can just activate a trap they don't need and force you to tribute this card. if you make it so you get to choose which trap it activates against, your opponent will be trapped, not knowing which of their cards they will be able to get away with using. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 kk thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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