spiderking999 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 here it is again i dont know if it will come up properly but it is my first card soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohalelulagive your thoughtsno bad comms kapich?how do you spell it anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzumiyaandy Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 It is spelled "Capeshe"Well, it's an okay card.Bad OCG, though.I give it a 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spiderking999 Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 thanx 4 the 7/10any way 2 improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SliferMigi Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Bad OCG and name should be capitalised.Red Eyes Ultimate Dragon, not red eyes ultimate dragon. And I think the card needs an effect, as (apparently :S) "Blue-Eyes brings powere, and Red Eyes brings potential."Come up with a sutiable effect and imrpove OCG and ill gve it higherNow its a 2/10 as this hasn't required much imagination so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spiderking999 Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 its my first card so what do you expecthonestly, veterans these days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center]You need an OCG Fix >Click Here<[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SliferMigi Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 its my first card so what do you expecthonestly' date=' veterans these days[/quote'] Sorry. But, I'm not a veteran, I'm just trying to help you see your mistakes and make improvements to both your card, and your card making skills in general. Just put it a tad bluntly, 'tis all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center]lol :lol:A 3-start a veteran .......... Follow link from my previous post![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Grammar and OCG errorsFixName: Red Eyes Ultimate DragonType: DragonFusion Materials: "Red Eyes B. Dragon" + "Red Eyes B. Dragon" + "Red Eyes B. Dragon"Why does it have an effect wen there is no actual effect.Lower the ATk4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taichi Masaki Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Grammar and OCG errorsFixName: Red Eyes Ultimate DragonType: DragonFusion Materials: "Red Eyes B. Dragon" + "Red Eyes B. Dragon" + "Red Eyes B. Dragon"Why does it have an effect wen there is no actual effect.Lower the ATk4/10 All of this I agree with, and get a new picture.Try this thread: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-27217-page-2.html2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 lol, 3 star veteran. Hello, my name is Yankeefan, and yes, I am a veteran XD Anyway,Your card is meh. It's basicly a normal fusion. My problem is, why would 3 Red-eyes amount to 3 Blue-eyes? Both Ultimates having 4500? o.o?Also, it needs more of an effect, lol Not a bad start however, you got a good pic ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SliferMigi Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 lol' date=' 3 star veteran. Hello, my name is Yankeefan, and yes, I am a veteran XD Anyway,Your card is meh. It's basicly a normal fusion. My problem is, why would 3 Red-eyes amount to 3 Blue-eyes? Both Ultimates having 4500? o.o?Also, it needs more of an effect, lol Not a bad start however, you got a good pic ;)[/quote'] Well I have been a member for a while, just don't post alot :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center]lol You've been here since Oct. I've been here since Jan. and I'm 5-star![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 lol' date=' 3 star veteran. Hello, my name is Yankeefan, and yes, I am a veteran XD Anyway,Your card is meh. It's basicly a normal fusion. My problem is, why would 3 Red-eyes amount to 3 Blue-eyes? Both Ultimates having 4500? o.o?Also, it needs more of an effect, lol Not a bad start however, you got a good pic ;)[/quote'] Well I have been a member for a while, just don't post alot :Slol, well I got over 7k posts, so...owned XD anyway, back to people rating the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 4/10 Capitalize when needed Overused pic Put a space between material monsters when neccisary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=[font=Verdana]Whole card fix[/font]]Red Eyes Ultimate Dragon Dragon / Fusion / Effect "Red Eyes B. Dragon" + "Red Eyes B. Dragon" + "Red Eyes B. Dragon"This card can only be Fusion Summoned by using the listed Fusion Material monsters. ATK/ 3800 DEF/ 3000 [/align] [align=center]You don't have to change the ATK and DEF but I reallywould.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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