Yondaime Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 This was a shop order that I made for The Giver that I think turned out pretty good. Rate plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted March 18, 2009 Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 Very smooth, but to small. Good for the first I've seen you do. ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miyu Sensei Posted March 18, 2009 Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 It's pretty good, perhaps detailing the background a little more would be better.XD Just the green makes it rather bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted March 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 Very smooth' date=' but to small. Good for the first I've seen you do. ;-)[/quote'] This would be my third...i didn't really want to make it much bigger. I hope to be good as you some day. You have to give me some of those sprites and backgrounds. Thx for the comment. It's pretty good' date=' perhaps detailing the background a little more would be better.XD Just the green makes it rather bland.[/quote'] The only reason I didn't do the background a different color was because all around his body are different shades of green so I didn't want to take all my time doing that. Thx for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted March 18, 2009 Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 As for the animation itself, it's pretty good, but seriously, remove the green. It makes it hard to see Sasuke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted March 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 As for the animation itself' date=' it's pretty good, but seriously, remove the green. It makes it hard to see Sasuke.[/quote'] I know...we were going to do the chidori part instead but he only wanted it in white but i said it would be to difficult... as you see this is all the different shades of green there are that i would have to make white.[spoiler=Screenshot] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted March 18, 2009 Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 Yep, thats the boring part. Removing those. I might share some sprites......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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