Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 You Bet I Am And To try And Show You I Made A Sig.Render From PR.Background Made By Me. Rate And Comment Pls That's Right, Here Comes Another: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 [align=center]Well you are improving!They are too big though!(Except that last one lol :lol: )[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 lolinvertlollrn2blendlolsize that is all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Well, you've kind of have a general flow going, but it's not really well doneBackground is really emptyRender doesn't fit in, he's just thereNo blending, lighting, or depth Text is badFlipped doesn't magically make it betterInverted almost never works, so don't bother doing it to your sigs This seriously just looks like a render slapped onto a background EDITTask Master one:Everything but the render is over contrastedBackground is emptyFlow is badly doneRender does not belongNo lighting, depth, or blending Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 "The last is your best imo ( In My Opinion ). I really don't feel like giving large CnC right now. But anyway, For the last it looks like it's too burnt, try adding more lines to it but at the back not on him. The C4D's need to be set on another type in the Layer Mask. Enjoy my really short CnC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 lolinvertlollrn2blendlolsize that is all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Lolzimprovingyeahrighthehe invert? NOFlip it? NOFail Sig? Yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 [align=center]Sky, keep this friendly Cove, I'm not saying your not improving, but really, find yourself a teacher, or a beginner tut.First is way too big, shrink it! Render doesn't fit it, nor does it fit the colors. Actually, a teacher would help you pick better renders, some with action and natural flow. And this tag has no flow, at all. You could use some C4D's, but, I don't recommend, since your new to this. No depth either, the whole tag is very distracting from the focal, which is the render, that is placed very bad. For second, remove text, until you are ready for it. Third, fliped is worse in this case. Not much to say. Fourth, Invert, is a no NO NO anytime ;) Fifth is your best. But too simple. Don't overlap renders with C4D's. EVER. It messes it up, unless it for a change looks good. Also, add a bit more flow, try a duplicate of your render, then a bit of smudging. Depth is not bad, but still, could be better... You have improved. Read tuts and stuff and you'll get better. I see potential in you =) ~.:BB:. out [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 1st is the best. And flipping it doesn't really do anything ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 My eyes hurt... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 KK Understood.~Removed Flipped, Text And Inverted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 The sencond is the better but still lacks focal and techniques.... keep trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Not brilliant, but pretty decent. Congrats on (nearly) reaching 1000 posts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 [align=center]You deleted all th other ones!Good![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 YH.And Thanks Alf :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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