zulax345 Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 i hope you like these cards :| ;)[/b][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Sorry, but these are not ultimate. First, "blue eyes black dragon" needs a type. Remember in English class when they told you to cap the first letter of the first word of every sentence? Same applies here. You have a lot of OCG (Official Card Grammer) errors and your names need to have caps in them. I give you a C- because your new at this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 I'm gonna go through this carefully, card by card: Blue Eyes Black Dragon:1. Terribad OCG and overpoweredness.2. Name Capitaliztion is needed. But just the first letters.3. There is no type. You need to put a type. Dragon Rider:1. OCG again, look it up in the OCG Thread.2. Name Capitalization, first letters only though.3. Dragon needs to be capitalized like that. Hyper Beam:1. OCG AGAIN.2. Name Cpaitalization AGAIN3. Overpowered. Time Recover(or)1. Name is spelled wrong. Don't put the (or) at the end.2. OCG AGAIN!3. Not such thing as a Quick- Play Trap Card.4. Name Capitalization. . . AGAIN! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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