david 10101 Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 [align=center]I Have Challenged DeMeNTeD To A 1 On 1. I Challenged Him To See How It Is Playing One Of The Greatest Card Maker In History And Soon I Will Be The Best With A Little Training. Anyway, Back To The Contest. If You Vote Please Have A Reason Why On cluding OCG, Picture And Spelling. DeMeNTeD's Card: [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card can only be Summoned if there are no Thunder-Type monsters on the field. Once per turn, if this is the only monster you control, you can skip your Battle Phase to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. If you do not use this effect, this card must attack during your Battle Phase. If this card attacks a monster your opponent controls whose ATK or DEF is higher than the ATK of this card, you can pick up the top 6 cards of your Deck. If 3 of the cards picked up by this effect are Monster Cards and the ATK of 1 Monster Card is higher than the ATK of the targeted monster your opponent controls, this card is not destroyed by battle (Damage calculation is treated as 0). After this effect resolves, send all cards picked up by this card's effect to the Graveyard. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________ david 10101's Card: [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand the Battle Phase of the turn this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destry all face-up monsters on the field except this card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Demented got more into it, and had a better effect.Kudos to you DementedBoth OCG seemed fine, but I didn't lookDemented's pic's better. It looks epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeadshotMagnet Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I vote demented because he had a better pic, ocg, and name definetly. Sorry David Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I'm giving David one vote. Even though Demented's card is better, I'm giving david a chance. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 David's OCG is apparently flawless. THis just means the guy doesn't know OCG at all. I only chose DeMeNTeD cause his pic is better and effect is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Actually, david has 2 errors: destry = destroy (spelled wrong ;)) except this card = (excpet this card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Actually' date=' david has 2 errors: destry = destroy (spelled wrong ;)) except this card = (excpet this card)[/quote'] I'm seeing 3, the Spirit Lore is off as shown by Kinka-Byo, the latest Spirit released in TDGS, and he appears to've spelled "except" correctly. "Japanese" is also misspelled in the name. david's version: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand the Battle Phase of the turn this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destry all face-up monsters on the field except this card. Corrected version: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the Battle Phase of the turn it is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destroy all face-up monsters on the field except this card. DeMeNTeD also has some errors. This card can only be Summoned if there are no Thunder-Type monsters on the field. Once per turn, if this is the only monster you control, you can skip your Battle Phase to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. If you do not activate this effect, this card must attack during your Battle Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a monster whose ATK or DEF is higher than the ATK of this card, you can pick up the top 6 cards from the top of your Deck. If [exactly?] 3 [or more?] of the cards picked up by this effect are Monster Cards and the ATK of 1 Monster Card is higher than the ATK of the attack target, this card is not destroyed by battle (without damage calculation). Send all picked up cards to the Graveyard. Without damage calculation is shown on Neo-Spacian Grand Mole, the latest example of such an event, and Reasoning is the latest example of a "pick up stuff and send all picked up cards to the Graveyard event." OCG aside, DeMeNTeD's the clear winner based on effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Demented killed this one. I wouldn't put "Japanese" in a card name :p DeMeNTeD gets my vote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david 10101 Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 yh mine says japenese. well that girl on DeMeNTeD's pic looks fat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Not really, she's covering most of her belly with that magical explosion XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Actually' date=' david has 2 errors: destry = destroy (spelled wrong ;)) except this card = (excpet this card)[/quote'] I'm seeing 3, the Spirit Lore is off as shown by Kinka-Byo, the latest Spirit released in TDGS, and he appears to've spelled "except" correctly. "Japanese" is also misspelled in the name. david's version: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand the Battle Phase of the turn this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destry all face-up monsters on the field except this card. Corrected version: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the Battle Phase of the turn it is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destroy all face-up monsters on the field except this card. DeMeNTeD also has some errors. This card can only be Summoned if there are no Thunder-Type monsters on the field. Once per turn, if this is the only monster you control, you can skip your Battle Phase to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. If you do not activate this effect, this card must attack during your Battle Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a monster whose ATK or DEF is higher than the ATK of this card, you can pick up the top 6 cards from the top of your Deck. If [exactly?] 3 [or more?] of the cards picked up by this effect are Monster Cards and the ATK of 1 Monster Card is higher than the ATK of the attack target, this card is not destroyed by battle (without damage calculation). Send all picked up cards to the Graveyard. Without damage calculation is shown on Neo-Spacian Grand Mole, the latest example of such an event, and Reasoning is the latest example of a "pick up stuff and send all picked up cards to the Graveyard event." OCG aside, DeMeNTeD's the clear winner based on effort. Excuse the typo. -.- I hate this keyboard. [spoiler=If you do not [b]activate [/b]this effect]Once per turn' date=' by Tributing 1 monster, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. This monster cannot declare an attack if you [b']used[/b] this effect this turn. Old or new, both "use(d)" and "activate(d)" would be considered correct [spoiler=During battle between this attacking card and a monster]If this card attacks a face-up Defense Position monster' date=' destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation.[/quote'] Again, either way would be considered correct. And having "and a monster" w/o "your opponent controls" after it sounds kinda weird IMO. Your opponent could activate an effect that could redirect the attack to a monster you control. [spoiler=the ATK of the[b] attack target[/b]]Activate only when your opponent's monster declares an attack targeting a face-up "Elemental Hero" monster you control. Switch control of the opponent's attacking monster with the targeted monster you control' date=' then calculate damage. Control of those monsters switches back during the End Phase of this turn.[/quote'] Once again, old or new, "targeted monster [you/your opponent] controls" would also be considered correct. [spoiler=(without [b]d[/b]amage calculation)]This card is not destroyed as a result of battle when this card battles with a monster with an ATK of 1900 or more. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) The (without damage calculation) part is correct, but I'm just pointing out that the "D" in Damage can be capped and still be considered correct. As for the other corrections, they will be put in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 It's not that there are any MAJOR EPIC OCG errors, just a couple minor ones. The cards are really good, Konami even wouldn't know the OCG differences :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 I know. I'm just saying what I do have on the card may be older, but it's still usable. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 DeMeNTeD's Card Wins. Flawless Victory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Older cards are cooler, I mean look at Time Wizard's OCG! It's just so admirable! :D And so is Cyber Jar's! So... old!!! :D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Perhaps I Should Write My Reasons All With Capitals At The Beginning Of Words. ...No, I won't. But that has NOTHING to do with the cards themselves. DeMeNTeD (Already I feel like i'm contradicting myself...) wins with the pic, it definitely looks more 'appropriate'. As for effect... DeMeNTeD wins again! Very... Strange yet interesting ability, while david10101's feels somewhat like a Dark Dust Spirit rip-off for some reason... And isn't really that interesting. So for me, DeMeNTeD wins. But in the end... Hey look, cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david 10101 Posted March 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Actually' date=' david has 2 errors: destry = destroy (spelled wrong ;)) except this card = (excpet this card)[/quote'] I'm seeing 3, the Spirit Lore is off as shown by Kinka-Byo, the latest Spirit released in TDGS, and he appears to've spelled "except" correctly. "Japanese" is also misspelled in the name. david's version: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand the Battle Phase of the turn this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destry all face-up monsters on the field except this card. Corrected version: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the Battle Phase of the turn it is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, destroy all face-up monsters on the field except this card. DeMeNTeD also has some errors. This card can only be Summoned if there are no Thunder-Type monsters on the field. Once per turn, if this is the only monster you control, you can skip your Battle Phase to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. If you do not activate this effect, this card must attack during your Battle Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a monster whose ATK or DEF is higher than the ATK of this card, you can pick up the top 6 cards from the top of your Deck. If [exactly?] 3 [or more?] of the cards picked up by this effect are Monster Cards and the ATK of 1 Monster Card is higher than the ATK of the attack target, this card is not destroyed by battle (without damage calculation). Send all picked up cards to the Graveyard. Without damage calculation is shown on Neo-Spacian Grand Mole, the latest example of such an event, and Reasoning is the latest example of a "pick up stuff and send all picked up cards to the Graveyard event." OCG aside, DeMeNTeD's the clear winner based on effort.thnx for pointing out my errors. i can copy and paste them on my card(but not the contest one) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Need more votes. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 *sigh* Demented gets my vote. David's card is basically a ripoff from Dark Dust Spirit only with the "except this card" part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 I know. I'm just saying what I do have on the card may be older' date=' but it's still usable. ;)[/quote'] Not exactly, the latest example of the effect in question should be what's used in your card effects, as Custom Cards can't be released back in time. Treat the effects as if they were to be released as soon as you made them. This is why wording such as "side of the field", "fuse", "as a result of battle", "ATK points", etc is frowned upon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david 10101 Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 conest ove . lock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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