Queen-Dragoon Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 [align=center]IMAGE CREDITTwilight Emissary - http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa97/AiXr3m/Girls/beauty.jpgAaroga, Lightsworn Champion - http://images.epilogue.net/users/sevencrows/angel.jpgLight of Destruction - http://solarisa.de/uploads/436-burst_of_light.jpg EFFECTWhen this card is discarded from your Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon it to the field in face-up Attack Position. When this card is Summoned to the field by it's own effect, Special Summon one Level 4 or below Monster with "Lightsworn" in it's name from your Graveyard. The Monster Summoned in this way cannot attack or change it's battle position. EFFECT"Twilight Emissary" + 1 or more "Lightsworn" non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, discard 2 Monsters with "Lightsworn" in their name from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Monster with "Lightsworn" in its name in your Graveyard. Remove one Monster with "Lightsworn" in its name from play to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it. When you Summon another Monster successfully, destroy this card. When this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, discard the top 5 cards from your Deck. EFFECTPay 1000 Life Points. Discard the top 5 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. For every Spell or Trap card discarded in this way, your opponent loses 200 Life Points. I'm using these cards in an RP. What do you guys think? And PLEASE don't just say WHAT I can improve, say HOW I can improve it. EDIT: FIXED SPACING IN AAROGAEDIT 2: ADDED DECK THINNING ABILITY TO AAROGA.EDIT 3: PLACED BOTH CARDS INTO A SET.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 i think Champion should have a Deck-thinning effect like the other Lightsworns. other than that, perfect ^^ 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 It would power him up too much if I did that. But yeah, I understand where you're coming from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 thanks for understanding ^^ i don't know if this is out of line, but coud you check out my new card post? its kinda hard to get attention for them lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Marvel Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 OCG is solid, and congrats. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ezio Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 [align=center]Nice Cards!But didn't you get 1,000 posts a while ago?Anyway that doesn't matter because these cards are pretty cool!Pics are good,OCG is perfect (I think)Names are goodEffects are goodOnly thing there shouldn't be a big gap between the Synchro materials!You did this:"Twilight Emissary" + 1 or more "Lightsworn" non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, discard 2 Monsters with "Lightsworn" in their name from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Monster with "Lightsworn" in its name in your Graveyard. Remove one Monster with "Lightsworn" in its name from play to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap or Monster effect and destroy the card. When you Summon another Monster successfully, destroy this card. It should be this:"Twilight Emissary" + 1 or more "Lightsworn" non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, discard 2 Monsters with "Lightsworn" in their name from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Monster with "Lightsworn" in its name in your Graveyard. Remove one Monster with "Lightsworn" in its name from play to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap or Monster effect and destroy the card. When you Summon another Monster successfully, destroy this card. Easy mistake but fix that ;)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Angel Of Death Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 i think Champion should have a Deck-thinning effect like the other Lightsworns. other than that' date=' perfect ^^ 9.5/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 i think Champion should have a Deck-thinning effect like the other Lightsworns. other than that' date=' perfect ^^ 9.5/10[/quote'] Fixed in the only way that I can without making him OPed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 I really like these cards. The name, image, OCG, lore, balance. The whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 I really like these cards. The name' date=' image, OCG, lore, balance. The whole thing.[/quote'] I really appreciate that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 np, I think you should keep making more cards like these two you have here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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spiderking999 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 these r kwlgoes well wih lightswornsmaybe make your synchro ore powerful coz no one has a deck with quite weak monstersanyways 9.99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Added a new card. Also, could someone tell me where the heck the OCG help thread in the Realistic Cards section has disappeared to? I've wasted a full hour looking for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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