Deloge Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Hm.. I think this is my strongest Thunder-Type monster I've ever made.. [spoiler=Art] http://sazabi-shun.deviantart.com/art/the-serpent-knight-14319689[/spoiler] [spoiler=Cards Lore] Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster you control to decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent control equal to half of the tributed monster. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, decrease the ATK all WATER monster by 500.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Card itself] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5755/225576scc.jpg[/img][/spoiler] please rate & comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Kale Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 try writing the effect like this: Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster you control to decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls by an amount equal to half of the tributed monster's ATK. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, decrease the ATK all WATER monster by 500. the middle line seemed off, as it didnt specify what you were decreasing by. ;) its cool, i would be interested in a follow up card. ;) 7/10 keep it up. ;) ~Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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