My First Dragon Card In ages!!!

[Tormented]

seriously in ages so tell me what ya think

 

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image credit

 

 

Effect: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to draw 1 card. This card gains 100 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard. Put 3 counters on this card when you Normal Summon it. This card is not destroyed as a result of battle. If this card battles a monster, remove 1 counter from this card at the end of the Damage Step. If this card battles without a counter, destroy this card at the end of the Damage Step.

[ιϻϻσяταᴌ Ωϻεϛα]

Nice card Serenade!! Love the pic.

10/10

[Tormented]

Thanks LC

[Mijaan]

8/10

I do not like this effect:

'This card gains 100 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard'

because you would be weakening your monster with the effect

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to draw 1 card.

[Rakesh]

I like the picture, but theres 1 OCG mistake.

[Jovi Siagian]

I don't think EARTH attribute fits the name "Chaos". Oh, well, don't think about it.

 

"This card is not destroyed as a result of battle." => "This card is not destroyed by battle."

 

Simpler and shorter. ;)

[LiAM]

[align=center]OCG fix:

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to draw 1 card. This card gains 100 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard. Put 3 counters on this card when you Normal Summon it. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card battles a monster, remove 1 counter from this card at the end of the Damage Step. If this card battles without a counter on it, destroy this card at the end of the Damage Step.

 

Thats what i thought was right anyway,

 

-review, basically, its a 3 attack monster, placing into a DARK deck allows around 3000 ATK or more. (lets face it, your gonna have more that 7 DARK monsters in your GV with all the support cards).

 

-Card effect seems to be balanced enough, ability to draw extra cards, good, but higher level msnters are supposed to be slightly overpowered, seems usable, possibly, if made, would be semi-limited.

 

-I like it :), i have a 'DARK destruction' deck, so this is perfect for me xD[/align]

[Guest Dark-Azkrin666]

seems farely good was about to say OPed but read the last effect and thats what made it balenced so i give a total of 7.42/10

[Tormented]

well in that case wouldn't it be a higher rank ?

 

 

8/10

I do not like this effect:

'This card gains 100 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard'

because you would be weakening your monster with the effect

When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle' date=' you can remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to draw 1 card.

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If you dont like it tuff luck

[1337noob]

nice card, the effects balance the card out so it wont be OP'ed. nice pic, too 9.8/10

[Kale]

This seems like a combo of Darknight Parshath and a member of the BES series. :| the effect seemed out of order, like you should have written the effects in a different order. maybe:

 

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card gains 100 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can remove 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard from play to draw 1 card. When you Normal Summon this card add 3 counters to it. When this card attacks, remove 1 counter from it at the end of the Damage Step. If this card battles without a counter, destroy this card at the end of the Damage Step.

 

it seems to flow better that way when you read it. ;)

 

its cool, but not very original.

 

6/10

 

~Kale.

[Tormented]

fine but thanks anyway