Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 [spoiler=Effect]During your Standby Phase, if you control this face-up monster, you can discard up to 5 cards to switch control of this card to your opponent. If you activate this effect, decrease the ATK of this card for each card discarded to use this effect. Control of this card cannot switch, except by its own effect. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon while its ATK is 1600 or higher. When this card's ATK becomes 0, it is destroyed. When this card is destroyed by its own effect, inflict 2000 damage to the last player that controlled this monster on the field. [spoiler=Image Credit]http://www.robot-japan.com/Gallery/Takatoku/Ishkick/Gerwalk-anime.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 leaves the field = is removed from the field Other than that, this is OK. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuclearLight Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 It is not leaves it is removed Overall[spoiler=Score]Pic 10/10Effect 9/10Idea 10/10OCG 8/10OverAll 9.5/10[spoiler=Comment]WAY TO GO KEEP THOSE CARDS COMMING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Having 2100 ATK is pretty useless when you can't attack any monsters with it. Being a Tuner is pretty useless when you lose 2000 Life Points using it as Synchro Material. It's like Ameba, but with... a 4-card discard added on? What the ****? 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leonidas135 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Having 2100 ATK is pretty useless when you can't attack any monsters with it. Being a Tuner is pretty useless when you lose 2000 Life Points using it as Synchro Material. It's like Ameba' date=' but with... a 4-card discard added on? What the ****? 4/10.[/quote'] Good point there is no need for it to be a tuner if it cost 2000 to use so change it to when this card is destroyed by it's own effect the contrroler of this card take 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Having 2100 ATK is pretty useless when you can't attack any monsters with it. Being a Tuner is pretty useless when you lose 2000 Life Points using it as Synchro Material. It's like Ameba' date=' but with... a 4-card discard added on? What the ****? 4/10.[/quote'] Good point there is no need for it to be a tuner if it cost 2000 to use so change it to when this card is destroyed by it's own effect the contrroler of this card take 2000. there is no self effect for it to be destroyed by. i would say remove the cost bit all together. it cant attack, and basically you covered the balancing bit with the extreme discard cost. lower the cost to 2 cards and remove the LP decrease and you will be perfect. ;) 4/10 ~Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leonidas135 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Sorry I forgot to add the sugested effect of destroying itself when it's ATK hits 0 :)lol I'm kinda changing the effect altogether sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I give it an 8.7/10. If you make it so you half to give it to your opponent by discarding four cards, then I think that would even it out enough. Great work, though, regardless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Honestly, It has one of the oddest effects I have ever seen o_o This + Owner's Seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 how about this then...During your Standby Phase, if you control this face-up monster, you can discard up to 5 cards to give control of this card to your opponent. Each time control of this card switches, this card loses 100 ATK for each card that was discarded to change control of it. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon while its ATK is 1600 or higher. When this monster's ATK reaches 0, it is destroyed and its controller loses 2000 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 how about this then...During your Standby Phase' date=' if you control this face-up monster, you can discard up to 5 cards to give control of this card to your opponent. Each time control of this card switches, this card loses 100 ATK for each card that was discarded to change control of it. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon while its ATK is 1600 or higher. When this monster's ATK reaches 0, it is destroyed and its controller loses 2000 Life Points.[/quote'] "During your Standby Phase, if you control this face-up monster, you can discard up to 5 cards to switch control of this card to your opponent. If you activate this effect, decrease the ATK of this card for each card discarded to use this effect. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon while this card's ATK is 1600 or higher. When this cards ATK becomes 0, it is destroyed and its controller takes 2000 damage." Big thing:"Each time control of this card switches, this card loses 100 ATK for each card that was discarded to change control of it." ( there would be no discards if you used swap or something ) Fix'd Nice card. PS: Hope you know your homonyms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leonidas135 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 shouldent the effect be when this reches 0 ATK the controler loses 2000 and this card is destroyed otherwise when this card is destroyed it then dels the damage while in the origonal owners grave meening you allways lose the 2000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I will update this card soon...but first, I want to get the effect right During your Standby Phase, if you control this face-up monster, you can discard up to 5 cards to switch control of this card to your opponent. If you activate this effect, decrease the ATK of this card for each card discarded to use this effect. Control of this card cannot switch, except by its own effect. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon while its ATK is 1600 or higher. When this card's ATK becomes 0, it is destroyed and its controller takes 2000 damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Like leonidas said with that effect you allways take the damage but very nice card the timeing on this card would have to be good so it would be fun to try this card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I will update this card soon...but first' date=' I want to get the effect right During your Standby Phase, if you control this face-up monster, you can discard up to 5 cards to switch control of this card to your opponent. If you activate this effect, decrease the ATK of this card for each card discarded to use this effect. Control of this card cannot switch, except by its own effect. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon while its ATK is 1600 or higher. When this card's ATK becomes 0, it is destroyed and its controller takes 2000 damage.[/quote'] You're right on track. I might have to question the card's playability somehow... Your opponent might abuse it. I think this might be good with Venom Swamp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 [align=center]effect updated!please rate and comment![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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