Bekiroth Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Heyho ppl! My first post and first card! Check it out ;D Effect:This monster can attack once more for each monster card it destroys in the controller's battle phase. If this card is destroyed and send to the graveyard, remove it from play instead and special summon one LIGHT-attribute monster card from your graveyard in face-up attack position. Image credit goes to my uncle^^ Please post your opinion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bribri123123 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Eh. Its alright. The top thing that says, "Machine * Type..." shoudnt be there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bekiroth Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Fixed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bribri123123 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Fixed! Ah! Very good XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxim565 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Hmm.. not bad, kinda overpowered though. Increase the level, and it will balance the card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Not a bad card for a nOOb 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bekiroth Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 EDIT: Increased Lv by 2 for balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 These cards aren't really bad, just barely ok by the looks of me, I like the image, it's great but can be improved with a background, some OCG errors, I'll give a 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bekiroth Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Thx all for your comments! More would be nice^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YU-GI-OH 27 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Nice pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Judgment Dragon Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Pretty good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bekiroth Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Thx again. Plz tell me what you like or/and what you didn't like and what I should change in your opinion to improve this card. *Happy for the good rating for my first card as a beginner^^* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manu34 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Overpower 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 1 instead of one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krey13 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 sweet card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Don't say One Monster + etc. Say "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters" Heres how to fix your effect "This monster can declare once more when this card destroys a monster your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed while on the field, it is removed from play and Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position." There you go, and have the great rest of the day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bekiroth Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Thx Tyrantking! OCG fixed now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Very good for a n00b. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 OCG on post and on card aren't matching... and I prefer the OCG on your post. Redo the card, maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bekiroth Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Eh, what are ya talking about? I copied the text from Tyrantking and put it in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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