KellyYang Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Img from deviantart.com saerchinr Armor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KellyYang Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Rate pls BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Good card. 6/10. I only have alittle bit of tips on where you can improve.The pic is kind of bad. It's very fittying, but it has no background and looks like it's jist floating in space. The OCG is alitte bit off. It should read:"This card can only be equiped to a "Black Lister Soldier" monster. Increase the equiped monster's ATK by 500. When the equiped monster is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 2 Warrior-Type monsters from your Graveyard."The last bit, is it seems kind of over powered. I would make it so you can Summon 2 level 4 or lower Warrior type monsters from your hand or deck, and cut out the graveyard. IDK, just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 not bad kelly 7/10 (off Topic)how was your uncle birthday party. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Good card. 6/10. I only have alittle bit of tips on where you can improve.The pic is kind of bad. It's very fittying' date=' but it has no background and looks like it's jist floating in space. The OCG is alitte bit off. It should read:"This card can only be equiped to a [b']Black Lister Soldier[/b] monster. Increase the equiped monster's ATK by 500. When the equiped monster is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 2 Warrior-Type monsters from your Graveyard."The last bit, is it seems kind of over powered. I would make it so you can Summon 2 level 4 or lower Warrior type monsters from your hand or deck, and cut out the graveyard. IDK, just a suggestion. I would love to equip it to a Black Lister Soldier. Card:7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 hahaha (lol at the post above) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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