Kale Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 [align=center]Robo-Union Piece Strike This card can only be activated when a Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster you control declares an attack. Release the attacking monster and Special Summon a number of "Destructomech Tokens" (Machine-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) equal to the Level of the released monster. A "Destructomech Token" can only attack the attack target of the released monster. When a "Destructomech Token" attacks, it is destroyed at the beginning of the Damage Step. When a "Destructomech Token" is destroyed by this effect, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the attack target x200. I had an idea in my head for the monster to, when attacking, to disassemble into parts, then have each of those parts transform into "mini-bommers" if you will, then when they almost lay a hand on the creature they instead self-destruct and inflict burn to the opponent. what do you think? ;) i hope this card is better than some of the other cards i have recently made... i know i havent been on the top of my game lately. thank you Hunter for the art! half of the effect was inspiration from this art. ;) rate/fix for a rate/fix! you rate mine, leave a link for yours you want rated and i will return the favor. thanks guys![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 So it's taking "Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-type monster you control. Your opponent takes damage equal to the Level of 1 face-up monster he/she controls x 200 x the Level of the monster you Tributed." Except it involves Tokens and can be thwarted by Mirror Force and other things. If the attacks are negated, though, and the attack target is removed next turn, what do they do? >_> There should probably be a clause about them being destroyed at the End Phase if they don't declare an attack, or something. Interesting idea, though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 So it's taking "Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-type monster you control. Your opponent takes damage equal to the Level of 1 face-up monster he/she controls x 200 x the Level of the monster you Tributed." Except it involves Tokens and can be thwarted by Mirror Force and other things. If the attacks are negated' date=' though, and the attack target is removed next turn, what do they do? >_> There should probably be a clause about them being destroyed at the End Phase if they don't declare an attack, or something. Interesting idea, though. 7/10[/quote'] basically. ;) this adds in limits that make the card more fair than that effect. the fact that they cant attack anything else is what makes this card even more fair, and they could still be Tuned or tributed if they have their attacks negated and the target is removed. i thought about destroying them at the End Phase, but then that would have been releasing the monster for potentially nothing, so that seemed more underpowered to me in that aspect. thank you for commenting! geez, it seems like i have to wait forever for anyone to even just give me a hello around here.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 It wouldn't make it underpowered, really, it would prevent a game mechanic from screwing you over. If you have them sitting there at your End Phase, then your opponent Tributes/gets rid of the monster you originally attacked, you now have tokens who have no valid target to attack and are vulnerable with their 0 ATK. That's more underpowered than having them be destroyed at the End Phase, in my opinion. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 It wouldn't make it underpowered' date=' really, it would prevent a game mechanic from screwing you over. If you have them sitting there at your End Phase, then your opponent Tributes/gets rid of the monster you originally attacked, you now have tokens who have no valid target to attack and are vulnerable with their 0 ATK. That's more underpowered than having them be destroyed at the End Phase, in my opinion. >_>[/quote'] eh, Yusei would figure a way out a' that. ;) anywho, i was already thinking about adding that in. if anyone agrees with you, then i will add it. :D maybe, you could combo this card with a tuner during the main phase two if you didnt summon that turn, or you can Special Summon a Tuner out, if the attacks were negated. ;) anywho, i really do appreciate your comments. you seem to be one of the few people who actually comment on the card, instead of just saying "awesome" or "not awesome". thanks. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Interesting card, Kale. I think all the errors have been pointed out. I can't seem to find anythiing, really. I'll give it a:8.4506873493/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Interesting card' date=' Kale. I think all the errors have been pointed out. I can't seem to find anythiing, really. I'll give it a:8.4506873493/10.[/quote'] thanks for your support. ;) i appreciate it. EDIT: 4500 posts and 300 cards! =O coolio! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 500 posts away Kale. Anyways, congatz, and, how do ya like the going to be new name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 ...I would have made it Level 5 or lower, and thus allow Cyber-Dragony goodness. But w/e. 10/10 for the sheer originality and the epicness of that pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 I love the art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 This is from Castle Crashers, nice though it should be in Pop-Culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 ...I would have made it Level 5 or lower' date=' and thus allow Cyber-Dragony goodness. But w/e. 10/10 for the sheer originality and the epicness of that pic.[/quote'] well, if i did that, then it would be overpowered. Special Summon one CyDra, then tribute it for 5 Tokens, and then distribute some considerable burn. thanks for your liking of it though. :D I love the art. huh' date=' i wonder why.. :D This is from Castle Crashers, nice though it should be in Pop-Culture. just because the pic is from an anime doesnt mean it should be in pop culture.. the effect is realistic, and the pic is supposed to be a representation of what i want the effect to be. Who cares where the pic comes from in that regard? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 ...I would have made it Level 5 or lower' date=' and thus allow Cyber-Dragony goodness. But w/e. 10/10 for the sheer originality and the epicness of that pic.[/quote'] well, if i did that, then it would be overpowered. Special Summon one CyDra, then tribute it for 5 Tokens, and then distribute some considerable burn. thanks for your liking of it though. :D I love the art. huh' date=' i wonder why.. :D This is from Castle Crashers, nice though it should be in Pop-Culture. just because the pic is from an anime doesnt mean it should be in pop culture.. the effect is realistic, and the pic is supposed to be a representation of what i want the effect to be. Who cares where the pic comes from in that regard? I don't know.On the other hand YAY KALE!I forgot to rate the effect, no errors at all, art is nice (By the way it isn't a Anime, it's a game from Newgrounds.) 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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