The Mike Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Chapter 1: Evil Synchro!? ???: MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! It's over twerp. Knight of Thunder attack Leo's Evil Knight Token and the rest of his life points!!(450)(0)Leo: This can't be.???: Oh yes it can be. Your soul's mine.Yusei: Not so fast Bolt!Bolt: YUSEI! How? When? What are you doing here?Yusei: Dueling! *sets duel disk*Bolt: You dare challenge me!? *Sets duel disk* I'll give you a duel that you will never forget. Win then Leo's soul is free. Lose then he's gone.Yusei: Alright! Let's duel(8000)(8000)Bolt: The first turn's mine. I activate Thunder Dragon's Special Ability by discarding it to the graveyard I can bring out 2 other dragons to my hand. Next I play Cost Down. By discarding another card from my hand. All of my monsters are decreased by 2 levels. Next I summon Thunder Dragon in attack mode.ATK: 1600Then I place 1 card face-down. Your turn dweeb.Yusei: It's my turn. *Draws* I summon Speed Warrior.ATK: 900Bolt: That's weak!Yusei: Not for long! His special ability activates his attack points gets double during the summoning phase.Bolt: OH NO! That means---Yusei: It's stronger.ATK: 1800Yusei: Speed Warrior attack Thunder Dragon with Hypersonic Slash.Bolt: I activate my trap. It's known has Flat Level 4. It allows us to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from our hands.Yusei: Very well I special summon Junk Synchron.ATK: 1300Bolt: And I will pick Thunder Prince.ATK: 0Bolt: Oh and by the way he is a Evil Tuner.Yusei: *GASPS*Leo: Be careful Yusei. Hes going to Evil Synchro Summon.Bolt: Very perceptive. I Evil Tune my Prince and my thunder dragon to Evil Synchro Summon, Knight of Thunder. But to do that I activate my trap. Evil Tuning. It automatically Evil Tunes on my opponent's turn. So come on out Knight of Thunder.ATK: 2600Bolt: When he is Evil Synchro Summoned successfully 1 "Evil Knight" token gets to be on your side of the field.ATK: 1000Bolt: Oh and by the way I play my Quick-Play Spell. Evil Quick Attack. That means your Speed Warrior automatically attacks my Thunder Knight.Yusei: Oh no!(7200)Yusei: I activate my trap. Graceful Revival. It brings back my Speed Warrior. Now I get to Synchro Summon. I tune my Junk Synchron with my Speed Warrior to Synchro Summon. Junk Warrior. Let's Rev it up.ATK: 2300Next I activate the Shrink spell card. It shrinks your Knight by half of its attack points.ATK: 1300Junk Warrior send his Knight to the Scrap Heap.Bolt: Nooooooooooo! My knight! How did you attack?(7000)Yusei: It's my Quick Attack Spell. so guess what your Evil Synchro is no more.Bolt: We will see about that. To Be Continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 AAAAARGH!! Why do you have to use Yusei's friends? I don't know what just happened! You don't use any description! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO HAVE A DARK SYNCHRO SUMMONING?!?! This is cheesy and stereotypical. I would hope that this would just take place in the same timeline as 5D's, but it doesn't. If you're gonna type in script format, give it life and TELL US WHAT THEY LOOK LIKE, WHY THEY'RE HERE AND WHERE THE HECK THEY ARE.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 I am forced to agree with Weather Report on this one, also when I look on it I see little plot. You need to establish characters in the first chapter, that you failed at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 I barely see any plot. Its basically just a duel and there is little to no explanation. your using the script format. It needs alot of explanation for that format. Overall: please explain more and put in spacing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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