lunarkane Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Here is a trap I came up with not to long ago. Feedback is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Select 1 Face-Up monster in your opponent's control. The selected monster cannot Attack or change it's Battle Position. You can destroy this card during your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this card's effect is activated ^ I think that is right Good card for your 39th ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 no ocg errors, doesn't look overpowered, nice pic, pretty good name. I give it a 10/10, that is a great card, probably should be a real one.but it's not a privalage to destroy the card, it's a requirement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 umm awesome, there is OCG errors, I pointed them out >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 no cards say "in your opponent's control" they say "on your opponent's side of the field" Khaos, but yes, there are OCG errors, but it is not a privilage to destroy the card, it is a requirement. So you can't say "can". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboJoe Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Seems well enough. Balanced. . .nice pic. . .A okay. :D 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot attack or change Battle Positions. You can destroy this card during your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this card's activation. ^ I think that is right Fixed._______________________________ Shadow Spell > This card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 i like 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 9/10 good for a noob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 terribly underpowerd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sahan Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 A bit underpowered but balanced8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 no cards say "in your opponent's control" they say "on your opponent's side of the field" Khaos' date=' but yes, there are OCG errors, but it is not a privilage to destroy the card, it is a requirement. So you can't say "can".[/quote'] its: 'you control' Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot attack or change Battle Positions. You can destroy this card during your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this card's activation. ^ I think that is right Fixed._______________________________ Shadow Spell > This card. Fix'd the fixed of the fixed. Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot attack or change its Battle Position. Destroy this card during your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this card's activation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 9/10 good for a noob. Newcomer doesn't equal the word noob! Learn how to use 'em, as for the card;A bit underpowered, the OCG errors have been pointed to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Hitchen Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 This is a good card, but I agree with the comments that it's underpowered. There are two cards that are almost the same but more powerful; Spellbinding Circle (which does exactly the same but doesn't destroy itself) and Shadow Spell (which does the same as SC and also knocks 700 ATK off). I think you should make this card a bit like a weakened Shattered Axe, in that it prevents attack or position change and also decreases ATK. 300 ATK per turn should do it. Keep rockin'! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Wow, the image fits the title and the effect of the card! You OCG is a little off but overall this a balanced card! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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