cardmakerfoo Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Yeah, ummm... I got bored! LOL I'm expecting to have a lot of feedback on my OCG. Didn't post a card for 6 months so...I kind of forgot all about OCG, but some of my knowledge didn't disappear into thin air! If you find any errors, please point them out and correct them for me! Constructive criticism is always welcome! Here is my card: Image Credits: I'm assuming you guys could read it, but if you can't just tell me! ;) Well, ummm...Yeah. Until next time, PEACE OUT FOOS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Fiend. Not Demon. Unless your using OCG and not TCG.I dun like the pic, OCG is a bit off, and I'm too lazy to correct.ATK is a bit UPd and DEF is okay. . .3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Fiend. Not Demon. Unless your using OCG and not TCG.I dun like the pic' date=' OCG is a bit off, and I'm too lazy to correct.ATK is a bit UPd and DEF is okay. . .3/10.[/quote'] How is the ATK UP'd? It's an 8 star monster with 2000 ATK? Well balanced, Demon is not a type though, don't capatalize the word "attribute" and it would be much better! Up the attack to at least 2300 or 2400, but not like 2800, 2900, or 3000. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldenrat Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Well unlike Alph i like this card.i'd use it in my deck :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 A little OP'ed, and Demon isn't a real type, so you'd need to move this to the Other Cards section if you don't want to change it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Fiend. Not Demon. Unless your using OCG and not TCG.I dun like the pic' date=' OCG is a bit off, and I'm too lazy to correct.ATK is a bit UPd and DEF is okay. . .3/10.[/quote'] How is the ATK UP'd? It's an 8 star monster with 2000 ATK? Well balanced, Demon is not a type though, don't capatalize the word "attribute" and it would be much better! Up the attack to at least 2300 or 2400, but not like 2800, 2900, or 3000. 8.9/10If you think about it the Atk is almost perfect cause of the increase it getsand it dosent apply that it doesn't get a boost from it self so its already at 2200 when you summon it and the most it can get up to with just its effect is 3000 if he changes the type to fiend that is. Anyway i'll give 7.84/10 get a better pic though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 I'm sorry. I forgot that the ATK is perfect. I'm friggin losing my friggin eyesight.Now, you get a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardmakerfoo Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Ok, thanks for the tips and info! I'll change it right away! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 The card is near perfect in OCG. theres only 1 problemOCG Fix:This cards attribute is also FIRE. This monster cannot be destroyed by monsters with 2400 or Atk. This monster gains 200 Atk for every Fiend-Type monster on your side of the field.fixs are in red9/10 for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angpueko Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Wow... good card.... playable!!!!! and since you fixed it your idea really came out.... 9/10.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 10/10 You really fixed it up! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 I like the card I'll give 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 lol you used a pic i used for my cards. I like how you did with the picture and the effect is balanced. The OCG is a bit off, like on a scale of 1 - 10, your OCG is 9.9999999. Good card. Score: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexbas Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Interesting effect, a lot like Gorlag on steroids 8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardmakerfoo Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Awww! LOL Thanks for the good ratings peeps! I fixed the OCG as Dark instructed. Thanks Dark and thanks you all! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 seems decent enough7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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