Slyph The Two-Faced Angel

[Overlord Lucan]

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Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, before this card attacks, if there are 1 or more monsters on your opponent's field, the control of this card is switched to your opponent. If there are no monsters on your opponent's field, this card's original ATK is doubled. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon it from the Graveyard to your opponent's field. If you do, you must end your turn.

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Rate, Review, Comment, fix.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Fix:

 

Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, before this card attacks, if there are 1 or more monsters on your opponent's field, the control of this card is switched to your opponent. If there are no monsters on your opponent's field, this card's original ATK is doubled. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon it from the Graveyard to your opponent's field. If you do, you must end your turn.

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Bolded = It's wrong, but I don't know how to reword it.

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Not bad, though I probably wouldn't bother using the last effect.

 

8/10

[Amethyst Phoenix]

Interesting effect, if your opponent has no other monsters and you have one, it's last effect is essentially an injection fairy lily. Otherwise, it's a 3000 direct attack. Seems kinda overpowered.

 

7/10

[Overlord Lucan]

Ahh but your opponent can do the exact same thing to you, when/if it changes sides. Also thank you demented for the fix!