yenyenyi Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Im a noob so if something is wrong tell me8)I just added more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 This is pretty good, especially as an early attempt. 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters (plural) "First Edition" is the correct circulation spelling, but it needs a gold sticker to realistically be First Edition or Limited Edition. Overall, it's pretty balanced. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yenyenyi Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 This is pretty good' date=' especially as an early attempt. 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters (plural) "First Edition" is the correct circulation spelling, but it needs a gold sticker to realistically be First Edition or Limited Edition. Overall, it's pretty balanced. 6.5/10[/quote'] Okay but I cheak my real cards and they said 1st Edition but you might be right because maybee my cards are old but, thanks for posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Ritual Monsters need Ritual Spells to be able to summon them... OCG is off, and entire words are missing in places (like in the Ritual Monster)... Good start, but they need a lot of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboJoe Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Non = nonone = 1special summon = Special Summon"Special Summon 1 monster with 1000 ATK or less from their hand or deck" <-- ?summoned = Summonedspell/trap = Spell/Trap"If there is a "Soul Eater Dragon" or "Soul Eater Dragon Evolved" on your side of the field, you can pay 500 Life Points to have this card attack your opponent directly" <-- ? 4/10 Keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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