axira10 Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 its a good start. fix the ocg errors. capatalize n such, n id def look at the effects of "Gold Dragon" "Black Dragon" and "Dragon Regenerate" once ur done theyll be pretty sweet cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 many OCG errors, 2 pics need backgroundsbut your an new member so6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboJoe Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Check out the OCG thread to find out how to improve your effects. Plus, words need capitalizing. >_< 1.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 OCG errors, as stated above (Such as: summoned=Summoned, graveyard=Graveyard, dragon=Dragon-Type, may=can, etc.) Couple pics need backgrounds; others are overused. Most of the effects are kinda simple. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Green dragon's effect is too good. Either it would have to have lower ATK or it would have to be destroyed after using its effect. I mean a direct hit of 2500? Dang Imagine if a player had more then one of these on the field at a time! Game over + newly banned card!I like the idea and the cards in general! I'm just trying to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axira10 Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Some are overpowered and some need backgrounds and some have errors and some crazy effects and let me tell you I figured that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHADIC OF DOOM Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 CHECK OUT MY MAGIC DRAGON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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