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My First Syncro Please rate.(updated)


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First, STUPID NAME!!!

Second, DO NOT PUT ENTERS AFTER EACH SENTENCE

Third, OverPowered

Fourth, I think U should add more to the effect

Fifth, NEED BETTER IMAGE

Sixth, 1 Tuner monster +... = 1 Tuner +...

Seventh, life points = Life Points

 

TOTAL 6/10 because your a newbie.

 

[spoiler=REAL RATING]2/10

[spoiler=REAL RATING]2/10

 

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First' date=' STUPID NAME!!!

Second, DO NOT PUT ENTERS AFTER EACH SENTENCE

Third, OverPowered

Fourth, I think U should add more to the effect

Fifth, NEED BETTER IMAGE

Sixth, 1 Tuner monster +... = 1 Tuner +...

Seventh, life points = Life Points

 

TOTAL 6/10 because your a newbie.

 

[spoiler=REAL RATING]2/10

[spoiler=REAL RATING]2/10

 

 

thanks for the advice.:D

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7/10, summoner of doom's effect doesn't make any sense when you say it that way, try saying

"when this card is summoned, you may summon a level 6 or under monster aswell."

You mispelled the wrath of volcano card, I know you may have done that on purpose for fun, however, when it comes to judging the card in public, it just looks, unprofessional.

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U SPELLED VOLCANO WRONG


attack=ATK

def=DEF

Capitalize the First letters in the quotes

increase=Increase (in your last card)

Capitalize the first letters in the Name like you would in a Book Title (such as only lower case the ect.)

Capitalize the first letter in its Type

Capitalize the first letters in the sentence

level = Level

graveyard = Graveyard

DONT DOUBLE SPACE

and U STILL DIDNT FIX WHAT I TOLD U BEFORE!

 

Is Raf supposed to be wrath?

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  • 2 weeks later...

TC's use of OCG is just way beyond terrible.

While were at it, TC cant even spell.

 

"Sumner" isnt even a legit Type(let alone correct spelling).

Its "Summoner". And even then, 'Summoner' isnt a real type. Its Type would have to be Spellcaster

 

And what the heck is "Raf"? You mean "Wrath", right? Since 'Raf' isnt even a real word. And equips that just offer LOLATK are boring.

 

And its "Volcano" not "Volkano". 'Volcano' isnt spelled with a K.

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