knight of the wind cmaker Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 here are some of my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manjoume Thunder Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Ok so first you need to use more capital letters. Also your first card is a vannila aka a monster card without an effect. Do not make vannilas except when you are going to make support cards for them. For the scond card you must change the lore to :This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Dragon Ruler Ritual". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more from the field or your hand. Also you may consider increasing the level to 8. This card also doesn't have an effect and that makes it boring. The last card has a lot of OCG errors. If you tell me if the summon must be a tribute summon or a speacial summon I might help :P Oh yea and the other part of the effect is: This card cannot be destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card. (or something like that) Edit: I didnt see that you 1st card is a vannila with an effect. Make it an effect monster and fix the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knight of the wind cmaker Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 k thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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