Magma Doom Dragon

[ShadowSpectre]

 

My first card that I posted here. :D

 

Please give constructive criticism.

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This monster's attribute is also treated as FIRE. To Tribute Summon this monster, you must tribute either three DARK monsters or three FIRE monsters. If this monster was Tribute Summoned with three DARK monsters, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field. If this monster was Tribute Summoned with three FIRE monsters, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponent's side of the field. This monster's original ATK becomes equal to the number of cards destroyed by this card's effect x 1000.

 

 

 

Thanks for the tips guys.

Is the ATK too much now?

[Doom_Shaman]

a couple minor ocg errors.

 

if you reread carefully you should easily be able to catch em.

 

umm, i think that last part is WAAAAY too much. hed be a much more usable card if you dropped the, remove from play n discard hand thing.

 

n i would maybe make his effect X 300 cuz hed be much more worth of such a high summon cost if he were powerful

 

or maybe limit his effect to destroying either monsters or spell n traps n make it 500???

 

just some tips. very good for your first card :D

[Haze]

It sounds to me that it should sond like

 

You must tribute 3 FIRE Type monsters.

 

Thats what it would seem to me idk

[Bull3tM0nk3y]

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