Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 [align=center][/align] [align=center]I accept any comments from anyone, although it seems this card has been temporarily fixed now. Thank you all commenter's.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Use http://www.tinypic.com >_> attachments are against the rules for CC section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 OK thank you for telling that, I will change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Or upload it via YCM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 I have done Mirage helped me, thank you anyway.Just one thing, is the image OK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 What is a quickplay Trap Card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 It seems decent >_> for your first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Well that's good then. I'll try to make my next card a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Its kinda bad, bad OCG, false card type, image seems streched, name is not so good and the effect is basic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Other than the fact that it should be a Counter Trap not a Quick-Play Traps (as Quick-Play Traps don't exist), it's pretty good for your first. The pic looks a little squished, but isn't too bad otherwise. The effect is basically a copy of Negate Attack minus the ending of the battle phase part. Overall, not bad for a first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 OCG fix for your second card: When this card is summoned to the field, Special-Summon 2 ''Tidra Moonflail' to your side of the field. = When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 2 ''Tidra Moonflail" from your Deck. oh its gone Just like to say, this card cannot work properly, think about it, you Summon it, then can summon 2 more, they are summoned, but their effect is uselss, as theres nothing to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Someone told me that it doesn't go onto another post, so I moved it back to the top. After all, I only started today. But I'm keen to keep learning, I could do with a mentor.OK, changed "Tidra Moonflail" again, hope its better now, if not, please say so :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SimpleNoName Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 For the trap card, remove the quick play and I think the description should be like this:When your opponent declares an attack, you may activate this card to negate the attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cypress Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 obvious, first card, too unorigionalmeh, second card, change 'end-pase' to 'End Phase' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 I'm not sure but thank you anyway. I will remove the Quick-Play part though. Thanks :)Will change, thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Still OCG errors, also where is your second cards type? and its remove from play, not remove from out of play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 OK - thank you Marvel :SThere, updated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon up to 2 more "Tidra Moonflail" from your hand or Deck. Destroy this card during the second End Phase after this card is Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Do you think that would sound better?I had changed "Tidra Moonflail"'s effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 I would also maybe lower its ATK to maybe 1000, being as you get 3 of them, and those are good tributes or card tributes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 *sighs* OK :), I shall lower the ATK. :lol:The ATK has on the card "Tidra Moonflail" has been changed from '1400' down to '1000'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Ok, the monster is fixed now, but the Trap card can go like this; Activate only when your opponents monster declares an attack, negate the attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 I'll tell you what :) shall I get rid of the trap card? :lol: it is simply just a copy of Negate Attack and any other negation card, so its just a remake, nothing but. I'll just remove the trap card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 You still need to fix your monsters OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunea Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 What needs repairing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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