Overlord Lucan Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Now i realize this is below your caliber but I think this could be a bit more fitting Now lets review why this fails1. Bad OCG (Original Card Grammar)2. Overused pics (While not your fault it still takes away from the originality)3. No Image Credit4. OP (Overpowered)5. Descriptions in card text6. For a set they dont really have synergy Also when someone makes a comment dont spaz at them. These are all Typical mistakes and can be fixed with time, look at some of the other cards around here, and some real Yugioh cards to use as a Baseline. If you want help with OCG or other things feel free to pm me or any other helpful members Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I like the pics, OCG errors 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryno Dorcus Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 8/10 for first cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRoseDaemon Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Artwork 10/10, the rest 3/10where'd u get pics from??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber-Valley™ Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Err. theres a lot of spam in this topic. Back to point: alot of OCG, Op'd and other useless things. 2/10, you should try harder, use vanillas if you must! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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