wall

[bucketmoo]

Best wall in aus

 

[zaradon]

OCG sucks and the picture does'nt look like the picture of a yu-gi-oh card.

[¶nÇØGn¶TØ]

What he said

[Archelaus]

what they said

[tom_legend]

alright for a noob

[LostLetter227]

It's an interesting effect for a new cardmaker, but it should be worded accordingly:

"When this card is declared as an attack target in Defense Position, you can decrease the DEF of this card by 1000 to destroy the attacking monster."

[LiAM]

What they all saud apart from 'tom_legend'

[mr.tacos]

hmmm well 7/10

[End]

Picture looks like a photograph... maybe it's just my eyes.

OCG is horrific (sorry too lazy to fix)

I don't know what "aus" is.

 

Keep on trying.

[tom_legend]

aus - australia, and no lostletter227 thats overpowered. It means the wall must be an attack target of your opponents monster, like ring of magnetism but lowers the defence

[kizzfan911]

I think the main thing is is that a real picture was used which isn't realistic. i'm pretty sure you can find a graphic of a brick wall. The saddest part is is this isn't the worst card. Since it's your first card i give you a 5/10

[OverlordMMM]

Change the text to "During your opponent's battle phase, you may choose to decrease the defense of this card by 1000. If you do, your opponent may only select this card as an attack target."

 

.....also, get a picture of a wall thats slightly cartoon-like or drawn and replace the one you have......(I have a difficult time getting pics myself because of how specific I need them, but yours should be easy to find)

[Rook Bishop]

I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it original

[OverlordMMM]

.....I agree with rookie about agreeing with me :) .......jk...

 

.....anyway, good luck with creating more cards.....

[Windowlicker]

I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it original

How the hell is a card about a brick wall original?

[Rook Bishop]

I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it original

How the hell is a card about a brick wall original?

 

Because no one would never have done it

[Windowlicker]

I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it original

How the hell is a card about a brick wall original?

 

Because no one would never have done it

The wall was discovered a long time ago, and I don't know how many times its been used, so it isn't that original...

That aside, staring at a brick wall doesn't really excite you does it?

[OverlordMMM]

I'm not saying the wall itself is original.....the effect is.......come to think of it, the name should definitely be changed..........

 

........"Defensive Wall Manouvre" sounds more like a spell card to me.............how about "Wall of Magnetic Ore" ?.....it allows the card to keep its "Rock" type, and it describes its effect well.......

 

(I feel like taking over the recreation of this card....lol....)

[xzMasteRzx]

Very nice try, but like the posts above me, change the grammar to the suggested corrections. And the picture fits the card. Nice card if your in the defensive.

Score: 5/10