bucketmoo Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Best wall in aus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaradon Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 OCG sucks and the picture does'nt look like the picture of a yu-gi-oh card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 What he said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 what they said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom_legend Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 alright for a noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 It's an interesting effect for a new cardmaker, but it should be worded accordingly:"When this card is declared as an attack target in Defense Position, you can decrease the DEF of this card by 1000 to destroy the attacking monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 What they all saud apart from 'tom_legend' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 hmmm well 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 Picture looks like a photograph... maybe it's just my eyes.OCG is horrific (sorry too lazy to fix)I don't know what "aus" is. Keep on trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom_legend Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 aus - australia, and no lostletter227 thats overpowered. It means the wall must be an attack target of your opponents monster, like ring of magnetism but lowers the defence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I think the main thing is is that a real picture was used which isn't realistic. i'm pretty sure you can find a graphic of a brick wall. The saddest part is is this isn't the worst card. Since it's your first card i give you a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OverlordMMM Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Change the text to "During your opponent's battle phase, you may choose to decrease the defense of this card by 1000. If you do, your opponent may only select this card as an attack target." .....also, get a picture of a wall thats slightly cartoon-like or drawn and replace the one you have......(I have a difficult time getting pics myself because of how specific I need them, but yours should be easy to find) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it original Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OverlordMMM Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 .....I agree with rookie about agreeing with me :) .......jk... .....anyway, good luck with creating more cards..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it originalHow the hell is a card about a brick wall original? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it originalHow the hell is a card about a brick wall original? Because no one would never have done it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I agree with OverlordMMM. 7/10 and it originalHow the hell is a card about a brick wall original? Because no one would never have done itThe wall was discovered a long time ago, and I don't know how many times its been used, so it isn't that original...That aside, staring at a brick wall doesn't really excite you does it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OverlordMMM Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I'm not saying the wall itself is original.....the effect is.......come to think of it, the name should definitely be changed.......... ........"Defensive Wall Manouvre" sounds more like a spell card to me.............how about "Wall of Magnetic Ore" ?.....it allows the card to keep its "Rock" type, and it describes its effect well....... (I feel like taking over the recreation of this card....lol....) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Very nice try, but like the posts above me, change the grammar to the suggested corrections. And the picture fits the card. Nice card if your in the defensive. Score: 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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