TwO oF mY nEwEsT aNd MoSt PoWeRfUl CaRd(now shortened)

[Archelaus]

DIVINE DRAGON OF ASSYRIA

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 7000 Life Points. Once per turn, you can destroy this card. When this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, Monster Card or by its own effect, you can destroy all the cards on the field. When this card is destroyed or removed from play by a card effect, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase and decrease this card's ATK by 200.

 

DIVINE DRAGON OF BABYLON

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 7000 Life Points. Once per turn, you can destroy this card. When this card is destroyed or removed from play by a card effect, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase and increase this card's ATK by 1000.

[kizzfan911]

wow. you can't read that at all. take out some of it. it would never be readable in real life.

[Archelaus]

anymore ratings?

[LiAM]

I would rate, but i hate reading, can you write it in a nutshell for all the retards of YCM like me.

[Esplin 9466 Primary]

ill try & shorten it,

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 5 face-up Continues Spell and Trap Cards you control to the Graveyard

 

becomes.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 5 face-up Continues Spell and Trap Cards you control to the Graveyard

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Select one card on the field, in your hand or in both players' Graveyard.

 

becomes

 

Select one ether player's hand deck or graveyard

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I'm sure if i kept going i could help more, but I'm tired right know.

[Archelaus]

there, i updated it and shortened it and kinda changed the effect

[Esplin 9466 Primary]

much bedder, i can officially give this card a rating of

9/10

[LostLetter227]

wow. you can't read that at all. take out some of it. it would never be readable in real life.

 

I would rate' date=' but i hate reading, can you write it in a nutshell for all the retards of YCM like me.

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Your eyes must be really bad.

 

My suggestion:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 7000 Life Points. Once per turn, you can destory this card. When this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster Card, you can destroy all the cards on the field. When this card is destroyed or removed from play by a card effect, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase."

 

1. "If this card is destroyed or removed from play by a card effect, Special Summon this card to your field ignoring the summoning conditions and decrease this card's ATK by 200."

If = When

to your field

It would be OPed if you could summon it during the same turn.

[Esplin 9466 Primary]

wow. you can't read that at all. take out some of it. it would never be readable in real life.

I would rate' date=' but i hate reading, can you write it in a nutshell for all the retards of YCM like me.

[/quote']

Your eyes must be really bad.

There aye's aren't bad, if you read post #6 then you would know that it was longer when "Tyler ex" 1st posted it.

[Archelaus]

it was almost 12 sentences when i firt posted it, lol