A Pirate Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 this is the first trap ive made. Im not sure if its worded correctly so if its not can you please tell me how its supposed to be worded. Please rate and leave feedback. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamop CardMaker Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Hmm...Ok I Guess. Now To the OCG. DEF mode = Defense Mode Hmmm...I'm sure the end line has something wrong but I can't just pull it out. Good Card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Pirate Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Hmm...Ok I Guess. Now To the OCG. DEF mode = Defense Mode Hmmm...I'm sure the end line has something wrong but I can't just pull it out. Good Card 8/10 Yea i dont think the end line is quite right either but i just cant seem to put my finger on what its meant to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Some OCG errors but i like the idea. It's like combining 2 existing cards in yugioh:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Pirate Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Some OCG errors but i like the idea. It's like combining 2 existing cards in yugioh:) thanks. i know theres a few OCG errors(and yet i have no clue what OCG means lol) but i have no idea what they are. rekon you could tell me what they are instead of just telling me they exist (no offense intended) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 All Monster(s) on your opponent's side of the Field is immediately changed to Defense Position. The position of Monster(s) on your opponent's side of the field cannot change until your opponent's next Standby Phase of the turn that this card was played. Immediately end that Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Pirate Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Thanks mate. the changes have now been made. hopefully it makes more sense now lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Nice I like the image is nice but needs to be cropped gimme a sec and ill crop it for you...... Work On The ocg youll become a great Card Maker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"Santa's Envoy" Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 If all monsters are changed to Defense Position and they cannot be changed (not even by a card effect) until his/her next turn, then it is likely not necessary to add: "Immediately end the Battle Phase". Also should include a more specific activation requirement, such as: "You can only only activate this card when your oponent declares an atack while you control only face-up Defense Position monsters." example.> As for the rest of the OCG: "Change all face-up monsters your opponent controls to Defense Position. The battle positions of monsters your opponent controls cannot be charged for the rest of the turn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Pirate Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 If all monsters are changed to Defense Position and they cannot be changed (not even by a card effect) until his/her next turn' date=' then it is likely not necessary to add: "Immediately end the Battle Phase". Also should include a more specific activation requirement, such as: "You can only only activate this card when your oponent declares an atack while you control only face-up Defense Position monsters." example.> As for the rest of the OCG: "Change all face-up monsters your opponent controls to Defense Position. The battle positions of monsters your opponent controls cannot be charged for the rest of the turn."[/quote'] I added the whole end the battle phase thing so that it prevents the opponent summoning other monsters and attacking with them. ive added a more specific activation requirement to balance the card out some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Alright 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonicsora123 Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Hmm...Ok I Guess. Now To the OCG. DEF mode = Defense Mode Hmmm...I'm sure the end line has something wrong but I can't just pull it out. Good Card 8/10 Yea i dont think the end line is quite right either but i just cant seem to put my finger on what its meant to be. same with me. maybe the last sentence is too short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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