Neilsweaky Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 This card cannot be Normal summoned or Set. Tribute 1 "Flame Swordsman", 1 WATER Monster, 1 WIND Monster, 1 DARK Monster, 1 LIGHT Monster, and 1 EARTH Monster from your hand to special summon This card. During Each of your Battle phases, flip a coin. If it is tails, Destiny Swordsman may attack directly this turn. If it is heads, Destiny Swordsman may attack twice this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Alot better than original version 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Thank you very much. Is the OCG correct? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrillseeker Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Alot better than original version 10/10 I completely agree! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Great! You guys rock! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthmual5 Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 I think, because its so tough to summon, its attack and defense should be boosted a bit, maybe to 2100 or 2050 and 1800 or 1850, something like that, but overall, great card. 9.8/10 (just cuz i think it deserves more ATK and DEF points). Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Thank you! The only reason i left it at 1850/1650 is because flame swordsman is 1800/1600But you are probably right.Thanks for the tips. Maybe 2500/2100 like DM... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hellmasterbg Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 I like it overall, but is so tough to summon :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Should i make it more powerful or easier to summon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 The OCG is horrible, and you cannot Tribute from your hand. Absurd to summon, and isn't even worth it. UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Thank you for the advice, but how could i change it?And its not clear why the OCG is incorrect...You could have explicitly explained how i could improve my card instead of what you said... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 The Text should be more like this: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one "Flames Swordsman" from your side of the field and discarding 3 monsters from your hand with different attributes. Once per turn flip a coin. Heads- This card can attack Directly or Attack Twice this turn. Tails- This card cannot attack this turn. This should make it balanced, hard to summon by good to use. With these edits I would have given it a 9/10. The original, however, I give a 5/10, average, but too many errors. Keep working on this, alright? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 No this is not even playable, let alone not intelligent to use. The original one is way better then this card. No wait what is better then this? MOST VANILLAS FROM THE TCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 This is my suggestion:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Flames Swordsman" you control. Once per turn, toss a coin. If the result is Heads, this card can attack your opponent directly. If the result is tails, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase."The effect should last forever; otherwise its still UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Taking Lostletter and hellmasterbg's advice Lostletter (great advice for OCG and summoning)hellmasterbg (good point)darthmual (good ideas for ATK/DEF)hollowmaster (Good OCG correction)have all been the most helpful Thrillseeker Super cheesy have all been most supportive Mirage, you did not only submit a rude response, but you didnot even try and help improve the card...You also hurt my feelings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burnpsy Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Just a nitpick here, but you misspelled "Flame Swordsman", LOL. It's not "Flames Swordsman". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Thank you i saw that but forgot to change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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