A Pirate Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Hey everyone! I am gonna show you my first ritual spell with matching monster. Please rate, give feedback and if ive made some errors with the wording can you please tell me what they are so i can correct them.Anyways heres the Ritual spell: And here is the Monster that goes with it:[spoiler=Lore]This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Delve Through Time". If this card destroys your opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row. If this card would be sent to the graveyard you may pay 700 Life Points to remove this card from play. Special Summon this card during your 2nd Standby Phase after this effect's activation. All image credit goes to google images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyTank Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 eh, the pic could be better, espiecially when he is from an anime (at leats it looks like he does), but the effect is OK 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Pirate Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 bumpies :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Not bad for a first attempt You SHould Try A more detailed effect it sems quite plain to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Pirate Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Not bad for a first attempt You SHould Try A more detailed effect it sems quite plain to be honest.What would you suggest? im kinda out of ideas lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Delve Through Time". If this card destroys your opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row. If this card would be sent to the graveyard you may pay 700 Life Points to remove this card from play. Special Summon this card during your 2nd Standby Phase after this effect's activated. Fix like thisIt will be better6/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 very few ocg errors, and EPIC pic, and as well a decent effect 7/10, nice!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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