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at the cost of 500 Life Points = at the cost of paying 500 Life Points

may = can

Pyro-type = Pyro-Type

 

I don't know if different counters are supposed to have speech marks around it.

Your OCG is good, a few more errors than I corrected, no big OCG errors.

 

Unless it's about your OCG, I'd give it a 8.1/10.

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"Activate only when you control a "Flarm - The Flare Wolf" with 2 Wolf Counters on it. Remove all Wolf Counters from a face-up "Flarm - The Flare Wolf" you control and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each Wolf Counter removed by this effect. You can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand."

 

The last effect is impossible because if this card would be negated, then everything else would be too. So here is what I suggest:

 

"Activate only when you control a "Flarm - The Flare Wolf" with 2 Wolf Counters on it. Remove all Wolf Counters from a face-up "Flarm - The Flare Wolf" you control and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each Wolf Counter removed by this effect. You can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 2 "Flarm Tokens" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/ATK 0/DEF 0)."

 

The destroyed part refers to when the effect is negated, which happens in most counter cards such as Solemn Judgment.


"Wolf Counters"

*facepalm*

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