compo23 Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 please comment and respond Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 not bad at all couple of och errors. "Negate the effects of monsters destroyed by this card in battle." or something along those lines, a sr member will probly correct it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Card is fine, I think you mean. "If this card destroys a monster by battle, this card is not affected by the effect of the monster." Too lazy to figure out if this is wrong or correct. At least you don't use attachments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
compo23 Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 thanks but i wont correct it because you get the idea already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 it should be "Negate the effect of a monster that this card destroyed as a result of battle." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naturia Master Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 good card nice effect 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 not bad dude verey good for a first atempt 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 It is not over-powered, so it is already a plus. As far as the effect, it is a little bland. Try to work some creativity into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Nothing too big, but simple enough for a newcomer. The image is simple... really simple. There's OCG errors. The effect isn't broked and balance enough. (Thankfully) And where's the credit for the pic? 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
compo23 Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 look at the second edition of this card at the top of the posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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