Dimensional Echo Skewer

[Guest JoshIcy]

[align=center]Might be a little overpowered. But I'm just testing a concept really. And if I see any posts that correct my OCG without asking, I will either neg or warn. Whichever comes first.

 

Select 1 Machine-Type monster removed from play and Special Summon it to your side of the Field and equip it to this card. The Special Summoned monster cannot be used for Synchro Summon or attack your opponents Monsters. The Equipped Monster gains the following effect; "When this card attacks it is treated as the effect of this card. The equipped monster can attack your opponent directly. If you do, inflict Damage to your opponents Life Points equal to the amount of ATK this card would gain by card effect."

 

Select 1 Machine-Type monster that is removed from play and Special Summon it to your side of the Field and equip it with this card. The Special Summoned monster cannot be used as a Synchro Material monster or attack your opponents monsters. The equipped monster gains the following effect: "This monster can attack your opponent directly. If you do' date=' the Battle Damage inflicted by this card becomes 0. Then during Damage Calculation, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined increased ATK of this card."[/quote'][/align]

[.Requiem]

Image looks like it is from gundam O.o I can see this being abused with high level machines, I am confused what does the last line mean. Also not really an attempt to correct OCG, but "your side of the field" isn't field lowercase?

[RickiMinaj]

Well, i like it alot. Yes, no cards are perfect, but you have to make an acception for this card. A spell card with a transfer effect, They should make a new types of cards called transfers. TO transfer the spell or trap card effect to the monster. And yours is the starting point!

[Shocked]

Wow I like teh pic very much....

Where you get the image?

[Guest JoshIcy]

Image looks like it is from gundam O.o I can see this being abused with high level machines' date=' I am confused what does the last line mean. Also not really an attempt to correct OCG, but "your side of the field" isn't field lowercase?

[/quote']

I don't know lol. I get confused there. And it basically means;

If a card gains 1500atk due to the effect of cards, that's how much damage it does.

 

Well' date=' i like it alot. Yes, no cards are perfect, but you have to make an acception for this card. A spell card with a transfer effect, They should make a new types of cards called transfers. TO transfer the spell or trap card effect to the monster. And yours is the starting point!

[/quote']

Thanks ^^. I thought I was a bit rusty with this card. But it's concept, so meh XD

 

Wow I like teh pic very much....

Where you get the image?

Adult Image Website xD

[Shocked]

Hohohoh... I think i can't go there

(:D

[.Requiem]

Yep that is gundam look here, they are basically the same image.

 

[spoiler=Image]

 

 

[Kotaro]

Its Exia.

 

Anyways, pic is pretty good, Think there were some minor OCG errors such as you didnt Capitalize equip and you put "your side of the field" which im sure that the new OCG for that is "your field"

 

Overall, i like that effect, 9.5/10

[Guest JoshIcy]

^: What part of I will neg or warn you if you comment on the OCG without asking did you not get? -.-"...

[Azmodius]

Wow. Thats quite good. 9/10. I expected it from a mod and great card maker.

[OmegaWave]

[align=center]Obsidian Rating

 

(OCG Fix) - Already asked Icy to fix OCG over IM.

Select 1 Machine-Type monster that is removed from play and Special Summon it to your side of the Field and equip it with this card. The Special Summoned monster cannot be used as a Synchro Material monster or attack your opponents monsters. The equipped monster gains the following effect: "This monster can attack your opponent directly. If you do, the Battle Damage inflicted by this card becomes 0. Then during Damage Calculation, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined increased ATK of this card."

 

(Grading)

OCG - 1/2

Picture - 2/2

Usefulness - 1.5/2

Balance - 2/2

 

Total - 6.5/8

Grade - B+

 

(Review)

I must say Icy....this has to be the most difficult/confusing card I have ever rated. However, I must also say it has to be one of the best. (Gives Icy a Cookie)

 

Your OCG is actually quite unique. It's not perfect, mind you. However, the point got across. The second half of the effect didn't make much sense to me until you showed me the "Gravekeeper's Vassal" card. Then it all connected. I respect your belief towards OCG rating, however, I am also here to correct/fix/rewrite/help in any situtation. Seeing as i'm the OCG teacher for Duel Academia. It's up to you to accept my help, but if you do, send me a PM and i'll do what I can.

 

Not much to say about the picture except that it's a very clear, blur-free, sleek picture that seems to fit the card's name and functionality. Are you serious that you got this picture from an Adult Image Site?

 

This card is very useful seeing as that you can rescue a removed Machine and even if the Equip Spell is destroyed, the monster remains. While normally that would be broken, the fact that the monster cannot be used a Synchro Material monster lags some deck builds back. Not being able to attack monsters is also a nice drawback that isn't always such a bad thing. Only inflicting Effect Damage and the requirement for ATK increases also adds to the balance. As you said over IM "Perfect for Machine King".

 

On a non-important note, maybe consider making this Spell an Ultra Rare considering it's meta-playability?

 

I would love to see more cards like this. Assuming I can still fix the OCG :P Good work Mr. Mod Man.[/align]

[Agaming]

a post by a mod!!

anyway nice card Icy i give 8/10 a few OCG errors but hey.

[Guest JoshIcy]

a post by a mod!!

 

Lol why wouldn't I? I am a CardMaker before I am a mod.

 

And @ Obsidian: Thanks, I really needed that.

[OmegaWave]

a post by a mod!!

 

Lol why wouldn't I? I am a CardMaker before I am a mod.

 

And @ Obsidian: Thanks' date=' I really needed that.

[/quote']

 

What? The advice or the cookie? XD

[Umbra]

Select 1 of your removed from play Machine-type monsters, Special Summon it and equip it with this card. The monster Special Summoned by this effect cannot be used for a Synchro Summon or declare an attack. The equipped monster can attack the opponent directly. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts is treated as Effect Damage instead.

[Parting Shot]

Well, it definitely is creative, but I'm not entirely sure I get it...

 

Gravekeeper's Vassal says that any damage it would inflict in battle becomes effect damage instead, but I don't get the parallel between that and your card here. There is nothing in your effect, as far as I can tell, that would increase the equipped monster's ATK, so I'm not sure what you're using as reference for the damage to your opponent's Life Points. I like the idea, but it's just confusing...

 

The pic and name are nice, though, so that's a plus :P

[42.42.564]

Well' date=' it definitely is creative, but I'm not entirely sure I get it...

 

Gravekeeper's Vassal says that any damage it would inflict in battle becomes effect damage instead, but I don't get the parallel between that and your card here.

 

[b']The Equipped Monster gains the following effect; "When this card attacks it is treated as the effect of this card.[/b]

 

yea, this part can be confusing. He was basically saying that any battle damage inflicted by the equipped monster is treated as if it is inflicted by the "effect" of the equipped monster. so it is changing the battle damage to effect damage.

 

There is nothing in your effect, as far as I can tell, that would increase the equipped monster's ATK, so I'm not sure what you're using as reference for the damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

if this card increases atk, then it would be abusive, as it can be used by any machine-type monster. this card is not meant for putting up a solo show, it has to be working with other cards, or a monster that has atk boost in its own effect, that's why he said it would be perfect for machine king.

 

 

[Guest JoshIcy]

Thanks lol.

But umm... 42, what's your actual opinion of this card?

[42.42.564]

the creativity is definitely there as far as the concept is concern. it can be stealing ur opponent's machine monster or reviving ur own. the image was pimptastically chosen. i can't say if this card would be considered overpowered in a case when u have tons of ATK boost, but considering you will also need supports of other types in a game, so i donno xD

 

i personally like the card as a concept card.

[nicholasflamel]

eeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yyyeaah.

10/10

[OhHerro]

Really solid card.

 

At it's simplest, a Monster Reborn that allows you only to Tribute it.

 

Combine this with a Machine card (IDK if there is one like this - you could certainly make one) that gets some godly effect when it deals damage to your opponent's life points but you'll never get it off because it only has like 100 ATK, and you're seriously in business.

 

Although for the most part, you'll only be using it as a tribute, unless you really are going to run Field Spells/Equips.

 

Solid card.

 

8/10

 

EDIT: Necro'd because Icy is sexy, and because newer members need a good example on the first page

 

EDIT#2: New rating: 9/10. It's hella creative.