Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Is the effect of this card overpowered? If so, how do YOU think it should be corrected? The artwork is not my own, I got it from here EDIT: New OCG and working effect (OCG by Obsidian) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Sorry, but for me that make no sence, when your Life points are 0 the Duel is over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 when your Life points are 0 the Duel is over I wasn't sure about that either, but I believe I recalled seeing somewhere a card that was similar to this type of activation, but I can't remember the name and vaguely remember the effect: When your Life Points are reduced to zero, your opponent must send all of their cards from their hand, field and deck to the graveyard (thus, making it a draw) If I'm wrong, sorry, but that's how I recalled it and thought it would be cool to bring back... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 It doesnt work. When your life points are reduced to 0, it's over, no stopping it. 3/10, make the effect work and, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 How's that? *bite's nails* :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Well, I suppose there were those anime-only cards Relay Soul and Divine Serpent that let you continue the duel when your life points were at zero. Buuuut, to be honest it doesn't work at all with '200 life points or less'. Although it does let you send monsters from your deck to the graveyard... Oh, and I think we call it 'release' rather then tribute now. *shrugs* Honestly, I don't know if it works well or not either way. Most of the time if they are about to wipe you out, they will have something to prevent card effects from stopping them. ...But hey, it's an interesting enough idea. Good luck with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Oh' date=' and I think we call it 'release' rather then tribute now.[/quote'] No. It's Tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 ...But hey' date=' it's an interesting enough idea. Good luck with it.[/quote'] Tnx Most of the time if they are about to wipe you out' date=' they will have something to prevent card effects from stopping them.[/quote'] Yes, but if you are smart, you can usually counter the counter - especially at a crucial time like when you may be about to lose. Then, there are also those cocky duelists... :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SliferMigi Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 I'd say: (OCG migth be a bit off though) This card can only be activated if your Life Point's would be reduced to 0. Remove from Play, up to 3 Monster Cards from your Hand.* Increase your Life Points by the total ATK of the Removed from Play Monsters. *I said only hand as if you could do it from anywhere it would be very Ovepowered. Hope I helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 if you activate it just during the effect or the attack, which reduces your LP to zero, then its possible! But I would say that you increase your LP by half of their ATK-points! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 How about this? This card can only be activated when you receive battle damage greater than your Life Points. You may remove up to 3 monster level 4 or lower from your hand and graveyard from play to increase your Life Points by the total ATK of the selected monsters. Note: Not sure if that is the proper OCG though, never really made a card with such an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Should be "half the total ATK" and Graveyard is supposed to be capped, 5/10. Other errors as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 This card can only be activated when you receive battle damage greater than your Life Points. You may remove up to 3 monsters level 4 or lower from your hand from play to increase your Life Points by half the total ATK points. This any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 If I could remember the steps of battle I'd tell you when you should activate this. Maybe something like "before damge calculation" but that way they still might kill you with there attacks. "Graveyard and hand" is fine, not many hands would have 3 monsters in them by the time you hit 0. But yeah it's better, there's still a few errors in the way you've phrased it but I can let it fly; I'm in a good mood today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 not many hands would have 3 monsters in them by the time you hit 0. Good point :P but I can let it fly; I'm in a good mood today. Phew! 8) So, now it stands at: This card can only be activated when you receive battle damage greater than your Life Points. Remove up to 3 monsters level 4 or lower from your hand or graveyard from play to increase your Life Points by half the total ATK points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 "Graveyard" needs to be capped, I already said that. Also you don't need "points", that's old OCG. Finally after ATK put "of the removed monsters". It's not perfect but it'll do. You're still new so keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 now its nice! 8/9.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterkil199 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 The new one is pretty nice 9.6/10p.s. name should be something like new hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 You create carts? like Mario Cart? or Go-Carts? Check your title, masterkil! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza4Lyf Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 p.s. name should be something like new hope. I called it False Hope because the opponent may think they have won already, ie: they have 'false hope' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 yeah...that makes sense.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterkil199 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 You create carts? like Mario Cart? or Go-Carts? Check your title' date=' masterkil![/quote'] Yes i do create cards and I know they aren't as good as this one but still i think the card name doesn't fit the card from my point of view.p.s. name should be something like new hope. I called it False Hope because the opponent may think they have won already' date=' ie: they have 'false hope'[/quote'] Ye i was was thinking more like you almost lost so there is new hope you know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Oh' date=' and I think we call it 'release' rather then tribute now.[/quote'] No. It's Tribute. You have no idea how happy you've made me *sniff*. They kept tribute for some things, YES. Anyway, it really does look like it works now. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 [align=center]Obsidian Rating Here, let me fix this card up correctly. (OCG Fix)Activate only when your Life Points would be reduced to 0 by Battle Damage. Before Damage Calculation, remove from play 3 level 4 or lower monsters in your hand and increase your Life Points equal to the total combined ATK of those monsters, then calculate damage. (Grading)OCG - 1/2Picture - 2/2Usefulness - 2/2Balance - 1.5/2 Total - 6.5/8Grade - B+ (Review)Congratulations! You've created one of my highest rated cards ever (Believe me. It's Extremely Rare that someone scores higher than a B with me.) Your OCG is actually quite nice. You're geared towards the old OCG format. Times have changed though and OCG has been reworded. I am the OCG Teacher for Duel Academia (Check my signature) and I would be happy to assist in any OCG problems if want to PM me. Joining Duel Academia would be a good idea actually. We can turn you into a Superstar Card Designer. As for the picture....FINALLY! I can see a picture that doesn't censor blood. Your epicness meter went up for that. This card is quite useful and can pull you out of a tough situation. While a card like this would normally be broken as fudge, the fact that you must remove 3 level 4 or lower monsters from play is good enough of a draw back. Besides, if you STILL have more than 1 level 4 or lower monster in your hand by that point, you're doing something terribly wrong. You'd need all the help you can get :P All in all, wonderful. Simply marvelous. I look forward to seeing more.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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