Domi the Mystery Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 I was inactive for almost a month! Well here is the new card! I've played the YGO World Championship 2007 on a nintendo DS emulator. I had a Dunames Dark Witch and a Neos in my hand. :D I wanted to make a ''Dunames Dark Neos'', but i didnt found a good pic for it. Then i sawed Father Wolf's picture of a blue guy. So here it is![align=center]Elemental Hero Father Ocean[/align] Effect:You can Special Summon this card, by Tributing 1 ''Elemental Hero Ocean''. If this card is Special Summoned that way, it gains 500 ATK. Each time, this card destroys a Defense Position monster, you can draw 1 card. In addition, you must discard 1 card. When this card is destroyed, instead of sending it to the Graveyard, remove it from play. Pic from Father Wolf! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 good but not too usefulthere are other elemental heroes bests7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Take out the comma after "Each time".Take out "In addition".Overall: Fantastic card!Minor grammar errors, good pic, it's great!8.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 [align=center]Obsidian Rating (OCG Fix)You can Special Summon this card by Tributing a face-up "Elemental Hero Ocean" you control. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, it gains 500 ATK. Each time this card destroys a Defense Position monster, draw 1 card, then discard 1 card. When this card is destroyed, it is removed from play instead of being sent to the Graveyard. (Grading)OCG - 1/2Picture - 2/2Usefulness - 1/2Balance - 1/2 Total - 5/8Grade - B- (Review)New Hero Support? Great....I'd love to see Jaden's Card Collection :P Your OCG is quite nice....you just seem to have a comma fetish. I am the OCG Teacher for Duel Academia. Feel free to send me a PM for OCG help. Wolfy-boy always seems to make great pics doesn't he? People use his pictures AAAAAALLLLL the time....and they never get old somehow O_O Your card seems a lil overpowered. Being able to Special Summon a 3300 ATK beatstick monster by tributing a weakling seems a bit much dont'cha think? According to the effect's wording though, this may be able to be used in combination with Dark World monsters....since the discard comes AFTER the cost. Overall, very nice....just try to avoid so many commas next time k? ;)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daichi159 Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Nice card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Tnx for your comments guys! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 great card maybe not so useful but everything else is good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 OK! TNX! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicholasflamel Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 7/10.-_--_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 7/10.-_--_- Spam! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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