Black-Rose Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Emm, i am new...and i made a card and...well here it is!When this card is Summoned, place 1 Night Counter on this card. During your Standby Phase, if this card has 1 Night Counter, you can remove it. If you do, during your next Standby Phase, negate this effect and place 1 Night Counter on this card. If this card has 1 Night Counter, it can attack twice in the same Battle Phase. If it does not have any Night Counter, it cannot declare an attack. When this card has 1 Night Counter, this card loses 1000 ATK. Sorry, i don't remember the artist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Cool idea and image, but some of your OCG (Original Card Grammar) is wrong. I suggest asking an experienced member to correct it for you, because I'm a little shaky on mine right now also. Very nice for a first card though! 9/10 once you fix the OCG. Also add the name of the artist/where you got the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black-Rose Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Cool idea and image' date=' but some of your OCG (Original Card Grammar) is wrong. I suggest asking an experienced member to correct it for you, because I'm a little shaky on mine right now also. Very nice for a first card though! 9/10 once you fix the OCG. Also add the name of the artist/where you got the image.[/quote']Thanx by the post, I need help with the OCG...But Thanx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Cool idea and image' date=' but some of your OCG ([b']Official[/b] Card Grammar) is wrong. I suggest asking an experienced member to correct it for you, because I'm a little shaky on mine right now also. Very nice for a first card though! 9/10 once you fix the OCG. Also add the name of the artist/where you got the image. It's Official Card Grammar not Original Card Grammar..Good OCG for a newbie, 9.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david 10101 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 brilliant for a 1 star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black-Rose Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Thanx very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yangninja Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Very original card effect and great IdeaI love it how most people's first cards are actually pretty good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 9/10 but post the effect under it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black-Rose Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Very original card effect and great IdeaI love it how most people's first cards are actually pretty good 9/10The effect is based to the gargoyles in the comics, they become stone by the sun, don't they?thnxxx!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Keeper Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Interesting member...Very good first card! You are awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baligin Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 This card is outstanding, very original nice effect. pretty good picture. OCG is a little off but that doesn't really matter since it's your first card. overall 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Not bad better then the rating of my first 9/10 and rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 When this card is Summoned, put 1 Night Counter on this card. During your Standby Phase, if this card has 1 Night Counter, you can remove it. If you do, during your next Standby Phase, negate this effect and put 1 Night Counter on this card. If this card has 1 Night Counter, it can attack twice in the same Battle Phase. If it does not have any Night Counter, it cannot declared an attack. When this card has 1 Night Counter, this card loses 1000 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 When this card is Summoned' date=' put 1 Night Counter on this card. During your Standby Phase, if this card has 1 Night Counter, you can remove it. If you do, during your next Standby Phase, negate this effect and put 1 Night Counter on this card. If this card has 1 Night Counter, it can attack twice in the same Battle Phase. If it does not have any Night Counter, it cannot declared an attack. When this card has 1 Night Counter, this card loses 1000 ATK.[/quote'] i figure you was coming to help sooner of later lol that was fast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jon92 Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Nice card. Good Picture. OCG errors. Not bad for a first card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 When this card is Summoned' date=' p[b']lace[/b] 1 Night Counter on this card. During your Standby Phase, if this card has 1 Night Counter, you can remove it. If you do, during your next Standby Phase, negate this effect and place 1 Night Counter on this card. If this card has 1 Night Counter, it can attack twice in the same Battle Phase. If it does not have any Night Counter, it cannot declare d an attack. When this card has 1 Night Counter, this card loses 1000 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Some wording errors but I like the direction in which you are attempting with the effect of this card, not bad for a one-star member and it's your first card and you pass in my book! Congrats! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black-Rose Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 THANX VERY MUCH!!! I will fix the effect.Ready Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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