Wanderley Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 here is it I think it is no my best^^but please rate^^ i fix the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATG3192 Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 I like the idea of it, the name, pic, and balance. I noticed some OCG errors in there. There are a few spelling errors, like its "declares." There is a small lack of punctuation, like there could be a comma between the part about declaring an attack and inflicting damage. I don't know if the newer cards are saying it that way, but I believe the "destroyed by battle" should be something around "destroyed as a result of battle." Those are a few of my suggestions. Overall though, I love the card, would so add this to my Warrior deck. Hope that my comments helped a bit. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted April 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 big thanks for post and ratedestroyed by battle is the new OCG its right^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATG3192 Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 Oh I didn't know that. lol. That's what happens when you really haven't collected any cards for probably a year, everything changes on you. lol. I stopped because I swore that I would not use teh 5D's cards, ridiculous in my opinion, but still, awesome card! ^__^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 I like this card, even if you have some grammar errors, but still, GREAT JOB!Score: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted April 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 lol^^thanks I give you a + rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 OCG errors. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted April 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 can you fix the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 new OCG300 damage to your oponentnot 300 damage to your oponent's Life Points anyway a good card as ever just dont like the image (because dont have a background)9/10 good card!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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