Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 LOCK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Name:tora tatsuochiApearance:medium hight with bright green hair and half of my chest is covered in skeletal armorAbility:High speeds. teleportingNumber:1Gender:maleZanpaktou:HisuiyukiRelease phrase:Last breath shouts justice. run hard. cry tears of silver. Hisuiyuki!1st release appearance:covered in skeltal armor.bone sword connected to each hand (think wolverine)Ability:incredible spped/Transporting. Invisiblitily2nd release appearance:Ghostly Skeletal figureAbility:Transporting, Invisibility, and Zanpaktou resistant (stronger ones can hurt me)sorry about this one. i sorta copy and pasted from the last RP i was in with you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OOC: Rule 4, all appearances must be put in to a picture.You can add a short description but you still need a picture. It is allowed, but don't you think the release phrase is a but long? After you get it fixed then more than likely you'll be accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OOC: Rule 4' date=' all appearances must be put in to a picture.You can add a short description but you still need a picture. It is allowed, but don't you think the release phrase is a but long? After you get it fixed then more than likely you'll be accepted.[/quote'] can you gimme a bit of time...i need to draw a picture please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Ok, send it too me when your done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 [align=center]-Name-Azure Kite-Appearance--Release Words-N/A-Zanpaktou Name-Azure Flame-Shikai Appearance--Shiaki Ability-Create Azure-Coloured Fames From Anywhere And Shoot Them At Foes-Final Release Words-"S... Safeguards... Failing, Relaese: BANKAI!"-Zanpaktou Full Name-Guardian Deity Of Azure Flames -Bankai Appearance--Final Release Ability-Gives Azure Kite The Ability To Make Use The 'Soul Drain Technique' Which Removes Part To The Opponents Soul, Giving Azure Kite Information On The Enemys Skills, Power, Weaknesses And What Not.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Name: Zarkus SyurenAppearance: Ability: Gets stronger as his comrades fallZanpaktou: VenganzaRelease phrase: Unleash thine wrath unto those who deserve it, Venganza (Vengeance)1st release appearance: Ability: Immense strength and speed increase. Also allows minimal regenerative abilities.2nd release appearance: Ability: Nearly unlimited spiritual energy. Obtains a portion of the power from all his fallen allies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 :.Untouched.: : I see no problem, EXCEPT your bankai..... PM me. Nightmare Zarkus: Even if its your 2nd release, immortality is too strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Edited. Made less broken and made his ability more relevent to his zanpakto name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OOC: Nearly unlimited spiritual energy? Thats even worse than immortality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 I guess I should explain it more. It means he never gets tired during battle, like Kenpachi. He has unlimited endurance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OOC: Oh, so you just have a crap load, not near unlimited.Ok, your accepted. Wait, you've still got the "Obtains the full powers of all his fallen allies"Thats too strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Ergh, I mean thats where he got the nearly unlimited spiritual energy from. But post edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OOC: Oh.OK.I see no more problem's.but just to be on the safe side, im gonna say this.You only get the spiritual energy that they have when they died, so if they used all there spiritual energy fighting then you won't get much.~You don't have to put that in your app.~ Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Eh, alright. Now we just gotta wait for more people to sign up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 [align=center]So I Was The First Accepted 0Squad... SWEET! Does That Make Me Vice-Captain? And This Wil Be My Last Question Post Till We Start[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OOC: Yes, that makes you VCI think i put your application's up.BTW. 1 thing that i didn't put in the 1st post.Seance i don't enjoy the huge gap in power between the espada like in the show, im gonna say this.The gap in power is not very big, so a fight between the 0 & 9 would be about the same as the gap between #4 & #6 (both unreleased. understand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Im the 0 Espada? It works well with my character's release, lolAnyway, alright, sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OOC: screw it, i don't feel like waiting.we start know. Zak: ~in the 0 squad barrack's sparing with a fer other 0 squad members~*Knocked a sword to the side with his sword*From the thousand grains of sand, to the very tops......*Before he could finish the kidou incantation the room was filled with a loud sound of an alarm* Shinigami: *Grab's his ear's because of how loud the siren is*What the hell is going on!? Zak: *After being startled for a moment he turned off the alarm with his rietsu*I don't believe it..... this hasn't happened in over 1000 years.*He sheathed his sword & FS out of the barrack's, he could not find even a single shinigami*I was right...its time to leave the barrack's.*He raised his spirit pressure, signaling to the other 0 squad member's that it was time to fight* *After everybody gathered, he opened up a portal to the human world.*Time too go oh, BTW, i don't want to start off fighting Espada, so you can control the hollow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 "Gack... wh-what is your name?"A dark figure was holding up a shinigami by his neck."Zarkus... Zarkus Syuren.""Ah... I'll be sure to... report your death to my captain!"The shinigami pulled out his Zanpakto and swung at Zarkus. It was an axe."DIIIIIIEEEEE!!!!!!!!"It hit his shoulder. Zarkus didnt move an inch.Zarkus's eyes started glowing."Hm. Im not going to let you live any more."B-but... wait! Stop!"Cero Crepúsculo (Twilight)"Two beams came out of Zarkus's eyes. One dark, one white."NO! NOOOOO!!!!!!"The shinigami completely disintegrated."Pathetic."Zarkus walked away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Zak: *Almost as soon as he arrived in the material world thousands of hollow appeared*I new it, the arrancar are here.*unsheathed his sword* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 "Ah, a shinigami is here. No matter. Go, my servant!"An arrancar appeared. He looked similar to Shawlong."Yes, my lord. I will eliminate him with ease."The Arrancar went to where Zak and the hollows were."Hello. Im Arthias. And you are?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Zak: The captain of the Zero squad, the strongest shinigami in the worldIm also the one who will kill you.My name is Zak.Those who mock his power shall suffer, dance in the forest while the wolves consume your flesh, mother cries as your skin is boiled and god of the underworld laughs as suffer*Slams his palms on the ground*Way of destruction #74 Hole of Agony.*A portal opens underneath the Arthias, a demonic white hand come out of the portal & grab's Arthias* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunshine Jesse Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 "Not so fast! I'll relase my Zanpakto! Mártir!"Thousands of needles surrounded Arthias"Upon hitting you, these needles will completly paralyze you and turn you into hollow food!"The needles rushed towards Zak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 OOC: you forgot to use your release phrase Zak: *Holds out his right hand & faces his palm at the needles*.......~Just before the needles got too him~Aggressive and agile.Way of binding #6, Flash shield.*A shield appears in front of him and block's the needles, the shield disappears after 3 seconds*Try again. Converge light into spaces of darkness.Way of destruction #4, White lightning.*Fires a bolt of lightning from his finger's directly at Arthias* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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