AbbatonStrikes Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 These are my first attepmts at some card...so be nice or you wont get a Xmas card, you have been warned!!! lol I based these cards on the Greek myth and Legends, which will leave me room to add other cards as there are soooo many smart me huh?? Anyway look, read, mock and enjoy people!!! When this card Attacks, it is changed to Defence Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 points while a face-up "Hades, God Of The Dead" is on your side of the field. When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can add 1 "Hercules" card from your Deck to your hand, The Deck is then shuffled. When this card is Normal or Special Summoned destroy all DARK monsters on your side of the field and inflict 300 points of damage to your life points for each card destoryed Once per turn during your Main Phase if you controlthis monster on the field you can equip it to your "Jason The Argonaut" as an Equip Spell Card, OR change it back to a monster in face-up Defence Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect "Jason The Argonaut" attribute becomes WATER and his is ATK and DEF are raised by 200 points (1 monster can equipped with 1 union monsterat a time. If the monster that this cards is equipped to is destroyed in battle, this card is destroyed instead) poor pic I know!! Thats it for now. Don't know bout you lot but I need to sit down that was one hell of alot of copy & pasting!!! Thanks for taking the time to read and look at them. If you can't read 1 of them do let me know and I'll sort it out for you...*ring ring* that specsavers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 well great good cards 20/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Cheers...I thought I'd get strung up from the nearest Yard arm!! lol well great good cards 20/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Noob no stop with that nao!!!!!!!!! Well try not to make normals unless they have some specific part in the set. You first card is OP or overpowered, seeing every card that your opponent draws. That is very good for you, but bad for your opponent. Ares is a beatstick, well the next few cards until the spell are balanced. Helmet is OP also well to a degree I guess. Well spell cards are decent. Well the rest are decent, I will look at them a little more before anymore commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 My Hercules can be added to my hand by Hera, that is why I stuck him in there. Jason The Argonaut union's with The Argo and Achilles along with the other two will go to make my fusion material monsters for my cyclops, Medusa and Minotaur when I make those up... This is between you and me so sssssssh but I kind of stole the idea for the Helmet from Mist Body but it doesnt have my negative of destroying the spell destroys the monster its euipped with...thought that would bring it back to eartha bit. Yeah I think you are right on relecftion Apollo is a bit too stong I tried to tie in there titles with there effects...Maybe Apoolo should just give my opponent Sunburn!! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Well I know it is, but people just rating cards for no reason doesn't work or help anyone. Well it is your first set, you can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 You are right thanks very much for your comments. I will try to make my next set a vast improvement!! Not sure what to do next hmmmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 I got an idea, how about japanese mythology. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Oh Flip me thats a tough one!! Norse mythology is a little easier..but ill look into it Fountain Of Knowledge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 well great good cards 20/10 no.no.no.no. vanillas serve no purpose other than to: pee on, burn things, chewing tobacco, cigarettes, bulletproof vests, sandwhich meat. not for good yugioh cards. 3-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legacy117 Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Hermes is the messenger of the Gods. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 True but he was also the God of Thieves, flight and commerce. As well as being the only postal service in the world that actually delievers your post lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 O sorry my bad I mistakes about some cards but I my rate is still great 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicholasflamel Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 dude.aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeee. do i need to repeat?!?!??!?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 dude.aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeee. do i need to repeat?!?!??!?!? Please don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Thanks for all the comments and info people greatly recieved. nicholasflamel seems to really like em...I think!! I will be adding some more soon like i said earlier got some fusion monsters coming and maybe a ritual for a titan like Kronos...master of time, could be fun. Bet your all excited now lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaraptor Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Sweet Cards Greek Mythology is my favorite 120/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 ... Bad OCG, the pics could be better, the effects are okay... I guess. You could do better with the OCG, much more. 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Ok people Im a new guy here so what is OCG???? Yes, yes Im a fool but tell me none the less. Is it something to do with the grammer of the cards descriptions?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Here OCG is Original Card Grammar Outside Original Card Game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 greek myth cards. sweet. i've seen some of the picks many times, but hey, they work. grammar fix: "of" in a title is not capitalized. i don't have time to fix any other ocg problems that might be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Cheers Mirage I thought it had something to do with that. Well I shall try something different next time there are just a nice base to start from...keep those comments coming people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 like mythology (posted my own about that of the Lord of the Rings.) these cards are better than my first set so a 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Thanks a 7.3 isnt a bad score on the first time out...It has been suggested that I move into other countries mythology, but I have other cards Im working on now hahahahahaha (Evil Laugh!!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Impressive, most impressive. Sorry to sound like Darth Vader there but your cards are S-W-E-E-T! my rating: 20/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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