KamuiK Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 I tried this, and with the help from the audience, it is finished now (except it has no holo effect):Please leave comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Eum... how should I put this? It's a okay card by the effect and all, but... the OCG (Original Card Grammar, or somethng like that) is bad. Really bad. It should be more like this: Neither players monsters cannot be destroyed by a Trap card's effect. When this card is sent to the Graveyard from the field by a Monster card's effect, destroy all monsters on the field. Increase the ATK and DEF of all LIGHT and FIRE monsters by 600. Decrease the ATK and DEF of all DARK and WIND monster by 500. I'll not rate your card until you fix the OCG. I know you can fix it! ;p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Fixed. Thank you for your help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Ahh, much more better. \\(^w^)// I'll give it a... 7.6/10It's a good mark in my book, don't worry. It mean:"Good card." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Hm, not bad for my first field card. Thank you. Gotta do more AQY cards now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Good, than I'll wait for you to do more and I'll try to find them all to rate them all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Wow, good card. I like the pic. And it's "WIND monsters" not "WIND monster". And also it's "Monster Card" instead of "Monster card". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Disse Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 I read it like when the card is destroyed, those attributes gain ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaara305 Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 8/10 realy good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Fixed again and wrote the main effects about ATK and DEF at the beginning. Thank you all for your comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ygofan35 Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 8/1olike the pic :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Well, it needs a holo effect, so it would look ever better, but thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naturia Master Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 nice card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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