Zeaux Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Another card from the berserkers bests setrate it and correct my OCG errors if you can [spoiler=Effect]If this card battles an opponents monster during your Battle Phase, it cannot declare an attack during your next turn. If this card destroy a oponent's monter, put one Poison Counter on a monster card on the field. Decrease the ATK of a card with a Poison Counter by 200. If a card on the field have 3 Poison Counters on it, decrease the ATK of all cards that your oponent's control by 1000. pic from deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 your OCG is errorsome But your actual grammar sucks. Tons of punctuation errors and you use illiteration which leads me to believe your OCG is off as well. 7-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 your OCG is errorsome But your actual grammar sucks. Tons of punctuation errors and you use illiteration which leads me to believe your OCG is off as well. 7-10 could you fix mi OCG plz? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 BUMPneed OCG fix plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 If this card battles an opponents monster during your Battle Phase, it cannot declare an attack during your next turn. If this card destroy a oponent's monter, put one Poison Counter on a monster card on the field. Decrease the ATK of a card with a Poison Counter by 200. If a card on the field have 3 Poison Counters on it, decrease the ATK of all cards that your oponent's control by 1000. intoIf this card attacks an opponents monster during your Battle Phase, it cannot declare an attack during your next turn. If this card destroys an opponent's monter, put one Poison Counter on a Monster Card on the field. The ATK of all cards with Poison Counters are decreased by 200. If a card on the field has 3 Poison Counters on it, decrease the ATK of all cards your opponent controls by 1000.Maybe like this, but nice card. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 BUMPrate anyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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