Zeaux Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 a dinosaur card WOW [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 2 EARTH monsters you control. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or higher monsters you control to double this card's ATK during the Damage Step only. If you use that effect, you must remove 5 Monster Cards from your Deck from play. If you have exactly 10 Monster Cards in the Graveyard during your Standby Phase, inflict 2000 damage to your Life Points. Fixed!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maspe Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 is that name ment to be cyrstal???either way I see no more OCG in your card.the card is blanced and effective for one turn kills you get a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 is that name ment to be cyrstal???either way I see no more OCG in your card.the card is blanced and effective for one turn kills you get a 8/10 no this is not a cristal beast it's is name is cristal because have a cristal on the pic XD anyway thanx!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Correct OCG: This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 2 EARTH monsters you control. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or higher monsters you control to double this card's ATK during the Damage Step only. If you use that effect, you must remove 5 Monster Cards from your Deck from play. If you have exactly 10 Monster Cards in the Graveyard during your Standby Phase, inflict 2000 damage to your Life Points. Wow, I started to like your cards. You remind me of myself back then. =)Good pic, solid OCG with few grammatical errors, Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 thanx toooooo much!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 You're welcome. Just keep it up. If you do, you'll become one of the great Card Makers in this site next month, maybe sooner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I like it.It's "in your deck from play" not "from your deck from play"9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 thanx and BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthmual5 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 is that name ment to be cyrstal???either way I see no more OCG in your card.the card is blanced and effective for one turn kills you get a 8/10 no this is not a cristal beast it's is name is cristal because have a cristal on the pic XD anyway thanx!! it would still be Crystal though XD... Cristal is not a word o.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 maybe Diamond Dinosaur better?and rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthmual5 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 No, those aren't diamonds, just change the name to Crystal XD As for rating, theres one minor spelling error, where it says, "Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or higher monsters you control to double this card's ATK during the Damage Step only", take out the "s" in "monsters". Thats the only correction i can find, other than the name. So once you fix them it'll be great, i'll give u a 9.5/10 :D nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 uve made better but not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 thanx benny D and darthmual!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 It's crystal not cristal. It's OP'ed. Even if you may lose 2000 Life Points, it's ATK will become 6400 which is way too much. I recommend lowering it's ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 ok but's i little hard you control a level 4 or higher monster if you summoned that card any way i will see what i can do and rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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