spell card an trap card, this is my attempt,ideas to make it better please

[boltiboy]

 

 

this is my trap card i am starting to make realistic cards instead, any suggestens what might help?

[.:Traceur:.]

this is not a trap card..it's a field spell cards...

[Soul Immortal]

Needs a bit of work, and not sure how to do so.

[AvatarKozaki]

For Original Card Grammer, I will translate:

 

"Select 1 Fusion Monster on your side of the field. If all the Fusion Material monsters that are used to summon that Fusion Monster are in your Graveyard, Special Summon those Monsters to your side of the Field. Each time your opponent draws a card, place 1 Spell Counter on this card. When the 4th Spell Counter is placed on this card, send it to the Graveyard and destroy all monsters on the field that were Special Summoned by this card's effect."

 

But yet, you should place a cost or more conditions for activating this card.

[Symbiote]

That's a Spell. You said Trap...

[fish-eye]

For Original Card Grammer' date=' I will translate:

 

"[i']Select 1 Fusion Monster on your side of the field. If all the Fusion Material monsters that are used to summon that Fusion Monster are in your Graveyard, Special Summon those Monsters to your side of the Field. Each time your opponent draws a card, place 1 Spell Counter on this card. When the 4th Spell Counter is placed on this card, send it to the Graveyard and destroy all monsters on the field that were Special Summoned by this card's effect.[/i]"

 

But yet, you should place a cost or more conditions for activating this card.

 

^^ this is great OCG!!!

 

pretty powerfull card. can be OPed in some cases but i like it. 8/10

[Archelaus]

For Original Card Grammer' date=' I will translate:

 

"[i']Select 1 Fusion Monster on your side of the field. If all the Fusion Material monsters that are used to summon that Fusion Monster are in your Graveyard, Special Summon those Monsters to your side of the Field. Each time your opponent draws a card, place 1 Spell Counter on this card. When the 4th Spell Counter is placed on this card, send it to the Graveyard and destroy all monsters on the field that were Special Summoned by this card's effect.[/i]"

 

But yet, you should place a cost or more conditions for activating this card.

 

great ocg dude,

 

BTW,

about the card.its a field spell not a trap, lol

8/10

[pl0x]

Some minor OCG errors, But AvatarKozaki has hit the nail with the correct OCG.

[boltiboy]

im new to al this so wat is OCG? :D

[Chileno4Live]

OCG means Original Card Grammar.

[boltiboy]

OCG means Original Card Grammar.

 

 

thx