andrewtc Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthmual5 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 i dont even know where to start with this thing... OCG/Grammar are both horrible... And theres no such thing as a quick play trap card... so just make it Normal. OCG fix:"When this card is activated, destroy every monster card your opponent controls. Your opponent then draws 4 cards from their Deck." <--- may not be perfect, im not that good at OCG either, but im learning so... i think this is right, but probably not... XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 This card is unrealistic. Bad OCG, pic has text at its bottom-left, a quick play trap does not make much sense and the effect owns your enemy. LITERALLY. After this trap is activated, he looses all his cards he has atm according to your text meaning both hand and field and is WIDE open for an attack of yours.Please take the following advise from heart by heart:If you make a card, think about the in-game effect at least twice. How strong is it? How can it be countered? Should the user pay effort to use it - in this case YES. And especially, do not make a card which is a potential game breaker except you have a very high risk when using it.Next is picture: at least 80% of all pictures cannot just be used for a card, they have to be worked on to fit better. Even then at least 30% of the remaining pictures still do not fit well.Hope that helps you. If you may update your card, I will give it a voting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshymitsu Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 It's a bit overpowered D:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamuiK Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 It's a bit overpowered D:.More than a bit actually, it destroys your enemy's cards in his hand and on his side of the field in one blow.:shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 This card has failed beyond the point of no return. There is no cure, since you won't bother to update this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 .....Nope nothing..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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