Leturn Master Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 I originally made two of these cards for a contest, and then realized that they'd make a cool set together. I'm thinking about putting them in the booster I'm creating (FELE: "Fearsome Legacy"), and have also given some thought to making them the cover cards (in the style of the booster with "Hamon", "Uria", and "Raviel"... whatever it's called). So I need some constructive criticism. Do they work? How's the strategy and OCG? Please make your rates and comprehensive as possible, and I will give +reps for good advice! Mossmurkel the Lizard(I'm thinking it would be limited or semi-limited, if useful) [spoiler="Mossmurkel the Lizard" Card Lore]You can only control 1 "Mossmurkel" card at a time. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, monsters level 5 and higher cannot attack. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can shuffle it into your deck and Special Summon 1 "Mossmurkel" card from your deck, other than "Mossmurkel the Lizard". Tree of Life - Mossmurkel(I'm fine with this card being banned. In fact, that would be a nice idea. Most importantly, how does the visual look and how good is the OCG? And is it original?) [spoiler="Tree of Life - Mossmurkel" Card Lore]You can only control 1 "Mossmurkel" card at a time. As long as this card card is not removed from play, you can have 1 "Fiber Jar" in your deck. If this monster is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard by battle, you may add 1 "Fiber Jar" from your deck or Graveyard to your hand. If either player activates the Flip Effect of "Fiber Jar", remove this card and "Fiber Jar" from play until the end of the duel. Mossmurkel's Scourge(I think semi-limited at the most. Should I expand the picture?)[spoiler="Mossmurkel's Scourge" Card Lore]You can only control 1 "Mossmurkel" card at a time. When this card destroys a monster by battle, discard 1 card (this is not optional). When this card is destroyed by battle, add 2 Flip Effect Monsters from your deck or 1 Flip Effect Monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Thank you for looking this over! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 I like the cards effects are creative^^in my opinion there are OCG errors but I don't can fix them^^good luck with your cards8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 I like the cards effects are creative^^in my opinion there are OCG errors but I don't can fix them^^good luck with your cards8/10 Well thank you! I'm glad you like the concept, but where are the OCG errors? If you just tell me, I'll try to iron them out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 OCG fixes: Lizard: You can only control 1 "Mossmurkel" monster at a time. Level 5 or higher monsters cannot attack as long as this card remains on the field. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can return it to your Deck and Summon 1 "Mossmurkel" monster from your Deck, except "Mossmurkel the Lizard". Tree of Life: You can only control 1 "Mossmurkel" monster at a time. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 "Fiber Jar" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. If either player activates the effect of "Fiber Jar", remove from play this card and "Fiber Jar" until the end of the Duel. Scourge: You can only control 1 "Mossmurkel" monster at a time. When this card destroys a monster by battle, discard 1 card from your hand. (this is not optional.) When this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 2 Flip Effect Monsters from your Deck or return 1 Flip Effect Monster from your Graveyard to your hand._________________________________________________ It doesn't look to bad; the pics seem to fit well with the theme (you should consider centering the 3rd one). I can see how you decided to put in Fiber Jar in one of the effects--with cards being shuffled back into your deck... It's also good to see more plants, in general. ^_^ Good luck with the rest of this set. ;) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 You can only control 1 "Mossmurkel" card at a time. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, monsters level 5 and higher cannot attack. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can shuffle it into your deck and Special Summon 1 "Mossmurkel" card from your deck, other than "Mossmurkel the Lizard". Change to: There can only be 1 "Mossmurkel" on the field. As long as this card is face-up under your control, all Level 5 and higher monsters cannot attack. If this card is selected as a Target during your opponent's Battle Phase, you can shuffle this card in your deck and Special Summon a "Mossmurkel" card from your deck in face-up Attack Position, except this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 OCG fix and coments 1 card - You can only control one "Mossmurkel" monster at a time.Level 5 or higher monsters cannot declare an a attackRate: 8.5/10 it's a lil' OP but is good as a limited card 2 card - this card coulbe a nice but Fiber Jar is a forbidden card sorry but i think you have to delete this cardNo rate 3 card - You can only control one "Mossmurkel" monster at a time.as a result of battleyou can discard one card from your handDeckRate: 9/10 a nice effect helps with FLIP set Just work on your OCG and you will become a great card maker :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 The last ones name should be Mossmurkel Eye of the HarbingersI think its fine look at Turbo Warrior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 also do Spell and trap cards supports that have an effect that you can use more than one Mossmurkel monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Oh no! the images are gone! use the imageshack codes for posting images of cards. (click on card in cardmaker, highlight and copy code under it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Thank you "Neilsweaky", I totally missed that. Btw, can anyone do holo effects for these cards? And make a booster pack, too... 'cause I need help... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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