Seiyaryu Posted May 5, 2009 Report Share Posted May 5, 2009 I was recently entered in a contest in which the members had to make a monster, then make a fusion of it and a pre-existing card plus 1 support Spell & 1 support Trap to go with it. Here is what I made (except "An Owl of Luck" which was the pre-existing card I chose to use). Spacial UnicornDecrease the Level of this card in your hand by 1 for every Spell and Trap card on your field. When this card would destroy a monster on your opponent's field by battle, you can inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of this card. If you do, that monster is not destroyed. This Damage is treated as Battle Damage. Rare Flying Unicorn"An Owl of Luck" + "Spacial Unicorn"During yur Standby Phase, if there is no card in your Field Card Zone, you can Activate 1 "Unicorn Mesa" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. When this card would destroy a monster on your opponent's field by battle, you can inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of this card. If you do, that monster is not destroyed. This Damage is treated as Battle Damage. Unicorn MesaIncrease the ATK of all "Unicorn" monsters by 400. When a "Unicorn" monster on your field would be destroyed or be the target of a card effect you can send this face-up card on the field to the Graveyard to negate the effect of that card and destroy it. In addition that "Unicorn" monster cannot be destroyed during this turn. Spacial RisingDuring your Main Phase 2, if your opponent has the same number of monsters on their field as they did during your Main Phase 1, increase your Life Points by an amount equal to the Battle Damage your opponent recieved this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 I think "Spacial Unicorn" is kinda OP, you should lower the ATK a little bit. There's also OCG errors here and there, but not really bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Ocg= 7/10Creativity= 10/10Pics= 8/10Names= 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seiyaryu Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 :) Thank you so much! Any specifications on where I messed up and/or how to fix my OCG is greatly appreciated. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 not bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seiyaryu Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 :) Thank you for the Rating :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1337noob Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 some OCG errors and you spelled your wrong. these are really good cards. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakesh Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Some OCG errors.altogether: 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spell Master Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 some OCG errors but nothing a little fixing can't help. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 I like the idea, a bit of a girly one, but hey, its your choice. If you are making a set, i suggest post around 10 cards for an example fairly good, could use some work though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Marvel suckz! Excuse me, also that may have been spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 I suggest to not answer and simply whip out the sniper rifle that is called "Report Button". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spell Master Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 I suggest to not answer and simply whip out the sniper rifle that is called "Report Button". I agree with DarkHeage. if we continue doing this, it well only make that Yawn freak to do it more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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