Phantom Of Masyaf Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 the first one and it's summoning requirment keep updating dragon offering untill it includes all 3 dragons which i haven't made yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Sincerity isn't an emotion:/ Very bad OCG and Dragon sets are unoriginal. 2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Ocg errors, 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Of Masyaf Posted May 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 oh thanx mate you had to be critical about it why can no one koke or make a mistake or two in this forum geez. and you docked 10 points beacuse of that show me the first idea then baecause i got the idea from Yugioh 5D's episode 55 cgampions sincerity geezgot 10/10 in pop culture because people there let people have some room idf they make an ocg error and even so don't dock 7 points because of that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Dude chill, you did the card wrong; it doesn't look realistic, OCG is bad and ideas are boring. It's my opinion so deal with it. Here are my corrections to show you how many errors there are: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of “Dragon Offering”. You can destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent controls by discarding 1 Monster Card with a Level of 2, or more, higher than the targeted monster. Not perfect but it's better. I'm not insulting you I'm telling you you've made a bad card and you need to try harder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Of Masyaf Posted May 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 whimper whimper hahhahahahaha sorry that happens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Sincerity is an emotion (didn't you ever see Digimon Season 1?). Also, it might be better to turn the monster card into a ritual monster and turn Dragon Offering into a Ritual Spell card. Plus, take its level down by 1; its a bit weak for a Lv.10 (you're up against the Gods at this level). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 whimper whimper hahhahahahaha sorry that happens If you're here to jabroni on people who are actually trying to help you out because you seem to be new to forums, you can hit Alt+F4 and stop immediately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Of Masyaf Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Arghhhhhhhhhhh how bout you try it see what happens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Someone ban him, fvckin' idiot. I try to help and you ignore it and start being a d!ck to people, now I've turned to a small amount of flame. Congrats on making me hate you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Of Masyaf Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 dude wasn't talking to you not going to report you cause i'm goodhearted one more searword and reo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 If Icy is reading that... he should now understand how I feel. petrcech2, don't see our advices and opinions as something that are intended to be insulting or mean. Yes, you can do errors, this is the whole point of giving OCG fixes: we're pointing out what you did wrong so next time you do better. So please, I'll kindly ask you to read our advices and learn from them, instead than thinking we're bullying you. I was wrong once to get upset on you because I thought you didn't wanted to learn, I won't do that again. So... Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Accept fixes when they are given, nuff said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 How do you discard a card from the field. @_@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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