Zeaux Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 [align=center]Lazatyel, Chimera of the Forest [spoiler=Effect]If this card is in face-up Defense Position during your Standby Phase remove it from play. If this card attack your opponent directly decrease it's ATK by 500. If this card destroy a Level 5 or higher monster add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. During your Standby Phase if you have 5 or more cards on your hand, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. Coment, correct OCG, do whatever you want![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Overused picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 ? i never seen this pic before ok i will change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 PLZ more coments!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Effects okOcg errorsAwsome name 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 thanx :Dmore coments!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 OCG- 7/10Pic- 10/10Balanced- 8/10 Overall--- 7.5-8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 thanx toobut can anyone help me with the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 If this card is face-up in Defense mode during your Standby Phase, remove it from play. If this card attacks directly your opponent's Life Points, decrease the ATK of this card by 500. If this card destroys a Level 5 or higher monster, you may draw 1 card. During your Standby Phase, if you have 5 or more cards in your hand, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. Tried my best for OCG fixing. I'm not an expert... but I covered most of the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 If this card is in face-up Defense Position during your Standby Phase, remove this card from play. If this card attack your opponent directly, decrease this card's ATK by 500. If this card destroy a Level 5 or higher monster, add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. During your Standby Phase, if you have 5 or more cards in your hand, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. Also IMG credit is needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Thanx :Dbut i need to know if it's OP and any rate plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 This card is very OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 maybe if i put it ATK to 1700 is better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 There are a few too many "If" parts to the effect. That's not really that good. If everyone else considers the card OPed anyways, I'd advise revising the wording on that effect... or just redo the effect entirely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 OP^^but creative^^pic is really overused^^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 thanx i will fix it later more coments plz!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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