Choke Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Well hey, my first card in about 2 months, so take a look D:. Image Credit goes to =Ann-Jey on deviantART. Rates/Comments/Fixes. Thanks :). Effect: As long as this card remains face-up on the field with 3 other WATER monsters, decrease this card's DEF to 0 and increase this card's ATK by 1500. If this card is destroyed by a Level 7 or higher monster, send 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard, and Special Summon 1 WATER monster from your Deck or Graveyard (excluding this card). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 OCG is perfect. Picture has a custom holo, increasing its actual value. And the effect is balanced and awesome. In other words: Great job! Rated S, 10/10. Flawless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 10/10 but isnt it from sonic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 No. This is a Sonic-style fan-character like mine and many many many others (although mine just serves here to give me an avatar). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Thanks for the ratings guys, appreciate it alot ^^. Well lol, it really wasn't intended to be a sonic looking monster, but I definitely see how you can picture that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Bump D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 WOW preety good card works in a water set TOO GOOD10/10 keep it up :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Thanks Zeaux :D. Im really looking for rewordings though, just something doesnt sound right, this line "decrease this card's DEF to 0 and increase this card's ATK by 1500", its the decrease to 0 part thats getting me edgy, it just doesnt sound right. Thanks for the rating though :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 try: reduce this card's DEF to 0 and increase it's ATK by 1500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 That's ittt, I cant believe I couldnt think of reduce. Thanks (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 no problem any question just PM me :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxTenshixX Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Well how about..When this card and 3 other WATER monsters are face-up on your side of the field, this card's ATK becomes 3500 and it's DEF 0. It's just a suggestion.... Nice card though, the holo is awesome, and no OCG's....so I guess it's perfect. =) 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicholasflamel Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 10/10! My friend would love that card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Thanks for the ratings alot, and the fixes :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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