Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 This thread will be updated each time I feel like I want to create a random card, setting myself "the most beautiful for the most realistic possible" rules. See this thread as a personal strive-for-self-improvement as much as another Realistic Cards gallery... So, here's the first. (EDITED) Lore: When this card is successfully Summoned, you may select a monster on the Field. The selected monster cannot attack or change its Position as long as this card is face-up on the Field. Credits: deviantART, Ashje for the original holo sheet. Hope you like it, don't hesitate to help me fix my OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 The card is UP, that is all I have to say. You require a card to discard a card for this card. The first part of the effect is just like E-Hero Wildheart...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Well... I was waiting for anything but someone telling me this card is underpowered! That's quite surprising. Also... I should change this to the Main Phase I suppose? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 This card cannot be affected by the effects of Trap cards. During your Standby Phase, you must either Tribute a WATER monster you control or discard a WATER monster from your hand. If you can't Tribute or discard, destroy this card. also this pic is overusedbut the effect is good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 No >_> that makes, well basically the same. Also it is a beat stick, not even a good one at that............ Keep the first line and change the cards effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 While the card is indeed beautiful, just as mentioned earlier, could be a bit more powerful. Either a bit more ATK or some extra effect would be useful, considering its discard or Tribute cost. As for OCG, there is only a single error I found: Trap cards should be Trap Cards. In total, I give 7.5/10 for this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Picture and effect have been edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Sorta better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Thank you. I'm staying simple with the effects, don't want something elaborate too soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Okay, this one is indeed better, with its effect, it can stop an tough monster in acting. The new score is 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KunAguero Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 How can we do dark synchro and dark tuner.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Okay' date=' this one is indeed better, with its effect, it can stop an tough monster in acting. The new score is 8.5/10.[/quote'] Thank you =) How can we do dark synchro and dark tuner.... Go ask that somewhere else. This isn't a help thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 OCF Fix: When this card is successfully Summoned, select a monster on the field. The selected monster cannot attack or change it's position as long as this card is face-up on the field. Rate: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 I don't agree with your OCG fix: that apostrophe is useless. Isn't "its" correct? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 oh sorry XD but the rest is ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Thank you a lot. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 no problem :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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